childhood is happiest time for person life
Individual have their own childhood and theirmemories. Some people have positive and unforgetable memories, at the other hand, some of them have bitter memory in childhood due to some family problems. As far as, I concerned with former statment for following reasons.
First, parents are more caution for children, they grow them with love beside they teach politly with patient. Additonally, childhood is full of mistakes and fun because some time children extremly wants to do something on the other, hand parent stricktly restrict them, at this time kids think parents don't love us, they knows what is batter and best for their kids. for instance, kids wants to do swemming but they don't know swimming
Second, one common memory have every human in childhood is paly, kids try all sports no matter they know or not. playing with nighbourhoods kids, make cloths dirty, some time falling down give some screeches which hurt for limited time, neverthless stoped jumping aroud.
Additionally, childhood is enjoyable time in whole life because at that time no resposiblity of work , no tension for getting good job, no making money pressure. loving world full up with toys. making big laugh on little things some time children unresonable laugh make other smile.
In conclusion, best part of childhood parents love and they teach every kids, how to walk how to talk with patient. subling care and anger, fight with them for unnecessary reasons. last but not least, i enjoyed my time a lot and i have unforgetable childhood memories album. whenever i feel i look at album it send me backword besode rekindle my old memories.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...teach politly with patient. Additonally, childhood is full of mistakes and fun be...
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...t them, at this time kids think parents dont love us, they knows what is batter and ...
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...e kids think parents dont love us, they knows what is batter and best for their kids....
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...what is batter and best for their kids. for instance, kids wants to do swemming but...
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...nce, kids wants to do swemming but they dont know swimming Second, one common memo...
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... do swemming but they dont know swimming Second, one common memory have every hum...
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Suggestion: Playing
... all sports no matter they know or not. playing with nighbourhoods kids, make cloths di...
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...use at that time no resposiblity of work , no tension for getting good job, no mak...
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Suggestion: Loving
...ing good job, no making money pressure. loving world full up with toys. making big lau...
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...essure. loving world full up with toys. making big laugh on little things some time ch...
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...e laugh make other smile. In conclusion, best part of childhood parents love and they...
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... part of childhood parents love and they teach every kids, how to walk how to tal...
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Suggestion: Subling
..., how to walk how to talk with patient. subling care and anger, fight with them for unn...
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Suggestion: Last
...ight with them for unnecessary reasons. last but not least, i enjoyed my time a lot ...
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...nnecessary reasons. last but not least, i enjoyed my time a lot and i have unforg...
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Suggestion: Whenever
... unforgetable childhood memories album. whenever i feel i look at album it send me backw...
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... unforgetable childhood memories album. whenever i feel i look at album it send me backw...
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Suggestion: I
...ildhood memories album. whenever i feel i look at album it send me backword besod...
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Suggestion: sends
...bum. whenever i feel i look at album it send me backword besode rekindle my old memo...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'look', 'second', 'so', 'for instance', 'i feel', 'in conclusion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.267973856209 0.229887763892 117% => OK
Verbs: 0.166666666667 0.158761421928 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.114379084967 0.0866891130778 132% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0359477124183 0.046263068375 78% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0588235294118 0.0685040099705 86% => OK
Prepositions: 0.101307189542 0.118717715034 85% => OK
Participles: 0.0326797385621 0.0351676179071 93% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.55403872172 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.016339869281 0.0309702414327 53% => OK
Particles: 0.00653594771242 0.00188951952338 346% => OK
Determiners: 0.062091503268 0.0887237588012 70% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.0209618222197 0% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.016339869281 0.0139019557991 118% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1624.0 2387.08602151 68% => OK
No of words: 271.0 408.028673835 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.9926199262 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.48200974243 91% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.339483394834 0.338922669872 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.236162361624 0.251872472559 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.177121771218 0.174417080927 102% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.114391143911 0.112833075102 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55403872172 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627306273063 0.524397521467 120% => OK
Word variations: 70.0645370591 59.2087087015 118% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6684587814 68% => OK
Sentence length: 19.3571428571 20.5533526081 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1940806303 48.84282405 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 120.699889404 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.5533526081 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.642857142857 0.644075263715 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.54480286738 361% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 42.9733790195 45.7405998639 94% => OK
Elegance: 1.5375 1.45489161554 106% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243461760137 0.300154397459 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0814556118928 0.103427244359 79% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0765335311244 0.0752933317313 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.509582697754 0.497263757937 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.151355775618 0.151897553556 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837304718115 0.114077575197 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703827708744 0.0781384742642 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.162513152621 0.336927656856 48% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0436360062428 0.067059652881 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147983247013 0.210909579961 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513359483097 0.0618886996521 83% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8870967742 59% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.6433691756 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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