childhood is happiest time of person's life
Time is the most precious factor in our life and we need to learn how spend our time, but should we do our works quickly without any thinking? Everyone will answer this question based on his/her own characters, emotional concerns or personal experience. Since a logical response requires an accurate analyses from both sides, I prefer to work slowly with calm and deeper contemplation; therefore, I present the following justifications.
Saving money and gaining more profit, is the first and the most significant reason that I hold this idea, while even critics can't disapprove the accuracy of this point. By assigning some times for thinking before doing anything, we can have better understanding about possible consequences and results of our work. This act will create the opportunity to analyze the advantages and disadvantages of all choices, and after that, we just need to obtain the certain that our plan is working correctly. This act will culminate in having a choice with more benefits in the financial concerns, meanwhile a taking risks and working quickly will deprive us from these merits.
Another noteworthy aspect that should be addressed in this ongoing explanation is that working quickly make us blind to other points. Usually, people forget many things when they are rushing because they just want to achieve their main goals. For instance, I wanted to go to the university and I was late due to working fast with my researches. I just took a taxi to the university without bringing my staffs and wallet, so I couldn't pay the driver and I had to borrow some money from my friend.
Admittedly, by taking the risk of making mistakes we can acquire more experience, and we shouldn't be unaware of this point. With having more information about our common errors, we can apply these experience on order to have greater choice for next time. However, I believe we don't need to make mistake and waste or time. I recommend to use from other people's advice and experience.
To sum up, although many sightless people approve the title statement, by taking all the considerations and factors into account and careful verifying all aspects, I assert that it is a superior choice to do our work slowly and making sure that everything is correct.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 301, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'analysis'?
Suggestion: analysis
...a logical response requires an accurate analyses from both sides, I prefer to work slowl...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 126, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...at I hold this idea, while even critics cant disapprove the accuracy of this point. ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 427, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...out bringing my staffs and wallet, so I couldnt pay the driver and I had to borrow some...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 90, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
... we can acquire more experience, and we shouldnt be unaware of this point. With having m...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 278, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ce for next time. However, I believe we dont need to make mistake and waste or time....
^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'for instance', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.201438848921 0.229887763892 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.182254196643 0.158761421928 115% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0863309352518 0.0866891130778 100% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0431654676259 0.046263068375 93% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0863309352518 0.0685040099705 126% => OK
Prepositions: 0.10071942446 0.118717715034 85% => OK
Participles: 0.0503597122302 0.0351676179071 143% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.70571366308 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0383693045564 0.0309702414327 124% => OK
Particles: 0.00239808153477 0.00188951952338 127% => OK
Determiners: 0.0911270983213 0.0887237588012 103% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0215827338129 0.0209618222197 103% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00719424460432 0.0139019557991 52% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2261.0 2387.08602151 95% => OK
No of words: 380.0 408.028673835 93% => OK
Chars per words: 5.95 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.376315789474 0.338922669872 111% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.271052631579 0.251872472559 108% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.165789473684 0.174417080927 95% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.105263157895 0.112833075102 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70571366308 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586842105263 0.524397521467 112% => OK
Word variations: 69.1295605812 59.2087087015 117% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 23.75 20.5533526081 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2163094813 48.84282405 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.3125 120.699889404 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.5533526081 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5625 0.644075263715 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 50.8552631579 45.7405998639 111% => OK
Elegance: 1.13076923077 1.45489161554 78% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0934688243359 0.300154397459 31% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0826541219199 0.103427244359 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0732505783366 0.0752933317313 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.540470251317 0.497263757937 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.162730595127 0.151897553556 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0374016919392 0.114077575197 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402585060586 0.0781384742642 52% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.242412639385 0.336927656856 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0596449298544 0.067059652881 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0635226122388 0.210909579961 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277322928269 0.0618886996521 45% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
---------------------
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.