childhood is the happiest time of a person's life
In my opinion, childhood is the happiest time of a person's life. Personally, I lived in my childhood one of my best significant events that happened to me in my life. Although these events occurred to me from a long time I still memorized it until now.
First, I enjoyed with playing football and also swimming in the pool when I was a child. Every Thursday, when I meet my family at the end of the week, I play football in the garden of our home and I loved my uncle very much he always says jokes to me and makes me laugh all the time. Also, my uncle is a professional swimmer, he accompanied me to the pool and taught me the swimming every Thursday, so I considered the swimming is my favorite sport in my life I liked it because of him. As a result, I think that my family especially my uncle helped me to live my happiest times in my life in the childhood.
In addition to, Friday is one of my best days in the week because my father take me every Friday, and we go to the cinema. We always watching animation movies, this type of film is my most preferred movies to me until now. Moreover, we go to a restaurant to eat pizza. I like pizza, and I feel that if I was able to eat it every day, I will do that because I think it is very delicious and make me happy. Finally, we enjoy with watching matches in our club; my club organized a small event called challenge champion every Friday. I liked the to watch challenges like these matches, it's fascinating to me and also my father. This championship consists of eight teams and three rounds; the first round contains four games and the second round two matches, and finally, the last shot is the final round of one match, and the winner receives the trophy in the end.I think these memories very connected and accompanied to me in my life, always I remember it, and in fact, i am very sad because this event is over and converted to just memories
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, moreover, second, so, still, i feel, i think, in addition, in fact, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 75.0 43.0788530466 174% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 364.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.25274725275 4.8611393121 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46982758575 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478021978022 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 500.4 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.2165991599 48.9658058833 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.571428571 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.6045352989 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 5.45110844103 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13139508516 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787768520808 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.162925314074 0.0737576698707 221% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14449655332 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125852842666 0.0645574589148 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 58.1214874552 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.67 10.9000537634 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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