Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
traveling to foreign countries is better than traveling in their own country.
In my opinion, traveling to foreign countries is better than traveling in their own country like going to different cities in the country. Personally, I am living one of my best experiments now in the USA.
First of all, I believe that traveling to foreign country provides you with new cultures, languages learning. It makes you gain more skills that you never been accepted before, especially in your relationships with other people from different places and cultures. For instance, I am living now in the USA.I traveled to the USA from three years ago. I think that this experiment or you can say adventure is my best event that happened to me in my life. I am studying in an American university in Fairfield city, and this helped me in learning new languages and recognize new cultures.I learned many kinds of literature in the USA like American English, Hindu and also Japanese.One of my best friends called Sami, from India taught me Hindu letters and how you can make sentences from these letters. Moreover, I loved Indian food it's so hot and delicious.As a result, The traveling to the foreign country makes your culture to improve.
In addition to, the traveling to America helped me in finding excellent opportunities in my career. I am working as Game Developer. I faced many problems through this field in my country. It seems to me that you don't have more chances to get game developer position in any company. The main reason for this issue that most programming companies in my country preferred to make web apps or mobile applications apps directed to serve industries companies like accounting programs, production analysis programs.In addition to developing apps for restaurants and other commercial enterprises. It is rare to find a company that makes games apps, and if we see it, the company will give you few salary compared to the actual wage to this job in another country. As a result, these problems that I struggled with it in my country, I founded that the USA provided me with more chances in Games programming field. Since I am working now as Android game developer in Florida city. Also, I am taking high salary associated with more advantages in my company in the USA.Overall I see that my experiment to travel to foreign country provides me with more great opportunities in my career.
In conclusion, traveling to the foreign country one of the best decisions you can take it in your life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 71.0 43.0788530466 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2030.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 416.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87980769231 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80800511956 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487980769231 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 648.9 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.8882900611 48.9658058833 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.777777778 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1111111111 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251217665154 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0956636129648 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114705336704 0.0737576698707 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211584177188 0.150856017488 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.084991597465 0.0645574589148 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.