Some universities require students to take classes in many subjects. Other universities require students to specialize in one subject. Which is better?
The universities we study in it is a very important part of our lives. It is where we spend most of our time as students and also many years of our lives as adults and young. If I have the choice to select the number of subjects that we need to study them in my college, Some students I'm sure would believe that it's a great idea; others would disagree. In my view, I will select to be specialized in one subject and I will select the courses that serve my field or my major for two reasons.
First, specialized in one subject will help me to select and study the courses that related to my field and will help them in their practical life. For example, I remembered when I studied computer science at Institute of statistical studies and reserach at Cairo University, my institute gave them the chance to select any subjects we need from the list of subjects that contains more subjects abut my computer science major, so I selected my required five courses to the term from the major subjects like data structure, operating system, logic design and mathematics and also there are many subjects doesn't related to my major like statistics and also operating research but it's great for us to select what we want and ignore the others this helped me alot in my practical life because these courses make the difference in my cv to impressed big companies in IT field. Actually many colleges forced their students to select at least two subjects out of their major and I think it's very disappointed too many students because this will make them select courses they don't like it. As a result, I think it's very clear that every student wants the ability to select the courses that related to his major and will serve him in his practical life.
Second, the subjects of the same major served each other in my studying in the university. For instance, when I selected my courses in this institute and made it related to my major this introduced to me a great chance to achieve great success in my studying. I remembered when I faced some problems in logic design course and these problems are related to misunderstood to the mathematics part of this course. Actually, I didn't understand the functions for some operations like XOR, AND and NOR these operators represented a big challenge to me in this subject but I re-checked these operators when I studied it in my mathematics course and this helped me to understand it and finally I got it. So I think that studying one subject in my university through many courses served the same subject is very helpful to me to achieve success.
In conclusion, I agree that the university that makes their students concentrate on one subject will introduce a great help in the study and also in the practical life to them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, if, second, so, at least, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 95.0 43.0788530466 221% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2267.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 493.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59837728195 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71206996034 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57631724819 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.385395537525 0.524837075471 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 731.7 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.1344086022 174% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 154.783604706 48.9658058833 316% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 161.928571429 100.406767564 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.2142857143 20.6045352989 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.78571428571 5.45110844103 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174432456937 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822858674211 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498490435753 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139626261534 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361704809572 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 11.7677419355 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.1575268817 156% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.0537634409 159% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.247311828 156% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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