childhood is the most beautiful time of a person's life. Do you agree?
In my opinion, childhood is the most beautiful time in my life; I lived in my childhood one of my best significant moments that happened to me in my life. Although these events occurred to me from a long time I still memorized it until now.
First, I enjoyed in my childhood with playing football and also swimming in the pool. Every Thursday, when I meet my family members at the end of the week and playing football in the garden of our home. Also, I loved my uncle very much he always says jokes to me and makes me laugh all the time. My uncle is a professional swimmer. He is accompanying me and taught me the swimming in the pool. I am considering that the swimming is my favorite sport in my life, in fact, I liked it because of his encouragement, and this helped me to get trophies in swimming competitions when I was young. As a result, I think that my family especially my uncle and also my parents helped me to live my happiest times in my life in the childhood.
Additionally, my father is the best friend to me, and now he was dead. My father is taking me every Friday when I was ten years old, going with me to the cinema in the morning to watch animation movies, this type of films is my most preferred movies to me until now. Moreover, when we return to home, my mom is making pizza to us. I like pizza. I feel that if I was able to eat it every day, I will do that because I think pizza very delicious and make me happy. In the evening, we enjoy with watching matches in our club; my club is organizing a small event called challenge champion every Friday. I liked to watch challenges like these matches, it's fascinating to me and also my father. I think these memories very connected and accompanied to me through my life. I always remember it.
In conclusion, I am living in adulthood now, but I am unfortunate because these beautiful events in my childhood were over and converted to just memories.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...and accompanied to me through my life. I always remember it. In conclusion, ...
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Line 7, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...I always remember it. In conclusion, I am living in adulthood now, but I am u...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, still, i feel, i think, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 84.0 43.0788530466 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 363.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.3085399449 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61930310093 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482093663912 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.0 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 22.0 9.59856630824 229% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5587500735 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3157894737 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1052631579 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78947368421 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102760505128 0.236089414692 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0350075578215 0.076458572812 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493091911344 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939326572418 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647431420336 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 10.9000537634 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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