childhood is the most beautiful time in your life
In my opinion, childhood is the most beautiful time in my life; I lived in my childhood one of my best significant moments that happened to me in my life. Although these events occurred to me from a long time I still memorized it until now.
First, I enjoyed in my childhood with playing football and also swimming in the pool. Every Thursday, when I meet my family members at the end of the week and playing football in the garden of our home, this is most excellent time to me. Also, I loved my uncle very much he is hilarious always says jokes to me and makes me laugh all the time. My uncle is a professional swimmer and taught me the swimming in the pool. I am considering that the swimming is my favorite sport in my life, in fact, I liked it because of his encouragement, and this helped me to get trophies in swimming competitions when I was young. As a result, I think that my family especially my uncle and also my parents assisted me to feel happy in the childhood.
Additionally, my father is the best mate for me, and now he was dead. My father was taking me every Friday when I was ten years old, going with me to the cinema in the morning to watch animation movies, this type of films is the most preferred movies to me until now. Moreover, when we return to home, my mom is making pizza to us. I like pizza. I think that if I were able to eat it every day, I would do this because I believe that pizza is very delicious and make me happy. In the evening, we are enjoying with watching matches in our club; my club is organizing a small event called challenge champion every Friday. I savored to attend challenges like these matches; it's interesting to me and also to my father. I think that these memories very linked to me through my life until now.
Finally, I think that my childhood is my freedom and irresponsibility stage. Since my parents provided me with everything that I need like money, treatment, and love. Every day in my childhood I do not feel with any problems or struggling with any challenges, just I eat and play, but now when I became the teenager, I thought that I am responsible for everything in my life and also I am facing many obstacles daily. That is the real reason that is why I admire my childhood.
In conclusion, I am unfortunate because these beautiful events in my childhood were over and switched to just memories.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, moreover, so, still, i think, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 101.0 43.0788530466 234% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1932.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 444.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35135135135 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64259358745 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.461711711712 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 621.0 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 24.0 9.59856630824 250% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0684038071 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148928790699 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543656023654 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677033781944 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127952018858 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0896524502746 0.0645574589148 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.95 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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