childhood is the most beautiful time of a person's life. Do you agree?
In my opinion, childhood is the most beautiful time in my life; I lived in my childhood one of my best significant moments that happened to me in my life. Although these events occurred to me from a long time I still memorized it until now.
First, I enjoyed in my childhood with playing football and also swimming in the pool. Every Thursday, when I meet my family members at the end of the week and playing football in the garden of our home, this is most excellent time to me. Also, I loved my uncle very much he always saying jokes to me and makes me laugh all the time. My uncle is a professional swimmer and taught me the swimming in the pool. I am considering that the swimming is my favorite sport in my life, in fact, I liked it because of his encouragement, and this helped me to get trophies in swimming competitions when I was young. As a result, I think that my family especially my uncle and also my parents assisted me to feel happy in the childhood.
Additionally, my father is the best mate for me, and now he was dead. My father was taking me every Friday when I was ten years old, going with me to the cinema in the morning to watch animation movies, this type of films is the most preferred movies to me until now. Moreover, when we return to home, my mom is making pizza to us. I like pizza. I think that if I was able to eat it every day, I will do this because I believe pizza very delicious and make me happy. In the evening, we are enjoying with watching matches in our club; my club is organizing a small event called challenge champion every Friday. I savored to attend challenges like these matches; it's interesting to me and also to my father. I think that these memories very connected to me through my life. I always remember it.
Finally, I am unfortunate because these beautiful events in my childhood were over and switched to just memories.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 282, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'saith', 'says'.
Suggestion: saith; says
...o, I loved my uncle very much he always saying jokes to me and makes me laugh all the ...
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Line 5, column 774, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... very connected to me through my life. I always remember it. Finally, I am ...
^
Line 7, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ife. I always remember it. Finally, I am unfortunate because these beautiful...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, moreover, so, still, i think, in fact, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 81.0 43.0788530466 188% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 354.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32485875706 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55506093189 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488700564972 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 493.2 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 22.0 9.59856630824 229% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0276466776 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0555555556 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05555555556 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109825558203 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395392444626 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496703447182 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100091936756 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629132484962 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.78 10.9000537634 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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