a critical management principle is that when behavior is rewarded
Although, a critical management principle is that when behavior is rewarded.The professor disputes this action, claiming that, this act may cause many adverse problems to both the company and the employees.
First, he examines the point of increasing productivity by reward the employees of the company with many things like promotion job or money.The professor asserts that the employee will consider this award like you can say punishment because he will reward just in case of increasing the productivity. He will feel this missions that required from him something like punishment, and this will decrease the richness of the company and also will make the employee out of the mood and angry.In fact, he just needs to feel respect from his firm to his extra work.
Lastly, he counters the point of that if the company give the responsibility of the supervision of the person that he able to persuade people to achieve remarkable results, this will make a significant effect on the productivity of the employee in addition to improve the relationship between the employee and the supervisor. The professor asserts that the employee knows that the supervisor watches his work to evaluate him and evaluate his productivity. So he will prefer to be quite, and he will don't ask him about any problems that he faced it in his work, and he will don't ask him for any help to raise his rating evaluation, and this will damage the relationship between them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Although, a critical management principle is tha...
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Suggestion: The
...ciple is that when behavior is rewarded.The professor disputes this action, claimin...
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Suggestion: The
...many things like promotion job or money.The professor asserts that the employee wil...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...creasing the productivity. He will feel this missions that required from him somethi...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
... the employee out of the mood and angry.In fact, he just needs to feel respect fro...
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Suggestion: don't
...he will prefer to be quite, and he will dont ask him about any problems that he face...
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Suggestion: don't
...at he faced it in his work, and he will dont ask him for any help to raise his ratin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, lastly, may, so, in addition, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.4613686534 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 5.04856512141 238% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 22.412803532 174% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 30.3222958057 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1211.0 1373.03311258 88% => OK
No of words: 244.0 270.72406181 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9631147541 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7978899169 2.5805825403 108% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 145.348785872 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508196721311 0.540411800872 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 369.9 419.366225166 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 13.0662251656 46% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 21.2450331126 188% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.2722075758 49.2860985944 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 201.833333333 110.228320801 183% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.6666666667 21.698381199 187% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06452816374 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0879438881678 0.272083759551 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567669582593 0.0996497079465 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101431904114 0.0662205650399 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104937667669 0.162205337803 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123084666538 0.0443174109184 278% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.3 13.3589403974 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.34 53.8541721854 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.0289183223 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.38 12.2367328918 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 63.6247240618 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.7273730684 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.498013245 171% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.2008830022 161% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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