Choose one of the following transportation vehicles and explain why you think it has changed people s lives automobiles b bicycles b airplanes Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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Choose one of the following transportation vehicles and explain why you think it has changed people’s lives. automobiles b bicycles b airplanes Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Automobiles, bicycles and airplanes all contribute to change people’s lives. To choose one among three I will go with airplanes because they bring revolution in the development of nations. There are several reasons which support my idea that air transportation has changed people’s lives.

First, to travel long distances airplane is best because it takes less time and even to travel overseas it is the only convenient option than ship. Recently I came to the USA from India and in 16 hours which is about 8400 mile. It contributes to the country's economy a lot. People who need to travel more frequently due to business work prefer air transport because it saves their time and they can work more efficiently. The president and similar persons can not invest more time in travelling so they use air transportation only.

Second, the journey is more comfortable and safe by airplane than other transportation. For example, once my husband and I went to Arizona state from north California by road. We had all important things in our car but still it was a very tiring journey. It took twelve hours to reach our destination which we can cover in two hours by plane. Planes have facilities of food, washrooms and comfortable leaning chairs. It is a safe mode of transportation because there are less accidents on planes than road transportation.

Third, the airplanes are best for travelling in spite of it is also best for transportation of goods and material. The international speed post and courier services use air transportation for quick delivery of material. Planes have capacity to carry about 20000 kilograms of weight other than weight of fuel and its own weight. This is a large number and countries ship large letters, packages, cars, horses, construction equipment and even other airplanes.

To sum up, some people have a dream to fly in the sky like a bird so airplanes make it true. On the basis of the above reasons we can conclude that airplanes changed people’s lives completely.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 23, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'distances'' or 'distance's'?
Suggestion: distances'; distance's
...ople’s lives. First, to travel long distances airplane is best because it takes less ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 472, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun accidents is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ode of transportation because there are less accidents on planes than road transport...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, still, third, for example, in spite of, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1679.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 337.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9821958457 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89713037097 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566765578635 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.9311512469 48.9658058833 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.95 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.85 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170509690896 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052997662392 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648733124676 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110683785405 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0871383917583 0.0645574589148 135% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 23, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'distances'' or 'distance's'?
Suggestion: distances'; distance's
...ople’s lives. First, to travel long distances airplane is best because it takes less ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 472, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun accidents is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ode of transportation because there are less accidents on planes than road transport...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, still, third, for example, in spite of, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1679.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 337.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9821958457 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89713037097 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566765578635 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.9311512469 48.9658058833 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.95 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.85 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170509690896 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052997662392 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648733124676 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110683785405 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0871383917583 0.0645574589148 135% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.