colleg vacation and student ability
University is an important station in our life. It offers a different program for students between two semesters. Some of this program offered classes away from student specialty. Others motivate their student to participate in a work project. Personally, I believe that Universities should introduce the work project for their students during their vacation time. I think that way for two important reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
To commence with, Students will get ride off fear from speaking and interacting with other people. This would help them tremendously during a discussion of their final graduation project in front of foreign instructors. My experience is a compelling example of this, I remember when I was in college, they open classes for a high school student in order to learn English. All of us were excited to do that project to get training in communication with other people. Furthermore, we get used with questions and answers interaction during discussions. This project helps us tremendously when we get to the final year. We started to discuss our graduation project with instructors with much more confident. As you can see, this program built confidence among students and helps them in their graduation requirements.
Secondly, Student can save money from such programs. University can apply some fee for the high school students attending this program, and use this money to pay students who are teaching in this program which will help them to pay their bill or rent. For instance, My daughter enrolled in one of teaching program during summer, She saved money around five thousand dollars. She was so excited and told me that she is ready to pay her rent and part of her tuition. I was happy because I will not work extra time to offer more money for her. This experience taught me that. If university like to help their students, they can offer such like these programs in which student can get money and help their family too.
In conclusion, though some college prefers adding courses between semesters away from student major, I propose for the university to open classes for school students during that time not only because student college will get experience in open discussion but also they can get money which will help them in their college expenses.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ll help them in their college expenses.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1939.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 384.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04947916667 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73221516882 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486979166667 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 579.6 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 61.7100156624 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1363636364 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4545454545 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171621151041 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511183045417 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618592425218 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130499018177 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722485183575 0.0645574589148 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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