Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Parents are a very important advisor for us in our life. They put all their effort into their children in order to be better than them. In my opinion, students are not able to learn from their parents. I feel that way for two important reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, in order to be a teacher you have to go to college and study for 4 years. They teach you how to teach people using simple and clear strategies. Which means that our parents are not well trained to be teachers. My personal experience is a compelling example of what I mean. Recently, there was a crisis all over the world because of COVID19, this force all the countries to announce a state of emergency, and curfew has been applied to the population. Hence, kids were forced to stay at home and study online. I have three kids stayed at home and I have to teach them. when I started to see what they are taking online they had only recorded video for some classes and the rest they have to do it on their own. However, when I tried to help them with their assignments, I realized that it was very difficult and I was not able to help them. As a result, I hired a tutor to help them by giving them a virtual lesson every day. As you can see, I was if I had been a teacher, the tutor would not be hired for my kids.
Second, parents are busy all day working outside, which means that even if they have the ability to teach their kids they can do it only in their leisure time which was designed for a family to have fun. For instance, I am working at a hospital every day at least 9 hours, so daily I went back home at 7:00 pm. my kids at that time are ready to go to sleep and if they have any question or concern about one of their subject, they are not able to ask me. for that reason, I kept the same tutor who was working with him during curfew to help them the rest of the year.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that parents would not be able to substitute teachers and teach their kids. this is because they are not well trained and because they don't have enough time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, second, so, well, at least, for instance, i feel, i mean, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1677.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 408.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.11029411765 4.8611393121 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13701737977 2.67179642975 80% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470588235294 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 527.4 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.697666958 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.8571428571 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38095238095 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0955989488723 0.236089414692 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.034249689571 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353636734138 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0611799403592 0.150856017488 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0203708286536 0.0645574589148 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 58.1214874552 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.56 10.9000537634 60% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.78 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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