Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
No one can deny the fact that for children home is their first school and parents are their teacher. In the given scenario, it is perceived that there is no better instructor in the world than the parents. Meanwhile, I am of the opinion that undoubtedly it is the parents who understand their children well and provide better education. I feel this way for several reasons which I will explore in the subsequent paragraphs.
To commence with, kids tend to spend almost every time with their guardian until they reach the age to go pre nursery school. To be more precise, they learn the basic activity ranging from reading first letter to writing word to walking first step and on with the assistance of their parents. In addition, parents nurture their offspring with love and care and guide them about good or bad deeds. Drawing from my own experience, my parents taught all the basic elements of reading and writing to my younger sister prior to admitting her in school. Indeed, she was even fluent in writing alphabetical letter at home. Therefore, it is the parents who can teach their children in a way they could capture and children also tend to obey them than their teacher.
Secondly, children have an interaction more with their guardian than anyone else. Precisely, more the communication more they feel connected and could be friends of each other. In addition, treating children as a friend is crucial so as to guide them in whatever ways they could understand. To exemplify, if a bond between parents and their children is strong then they tend to share each and every happenings of their life thus parents could confer suggestion accordingly. Needless to say, parent’s guidance and suggestion never fail as they have an experience of life. Therefore, parents are best teacher although they do not attain tag of teacher.
The above mentioned statement sounds reasonable however school teacher also played a vital role in shaping their future. Furthermore, with their teaching experience they can grant possible solution to their issues. Having said that, family matters the most and children tend to obey and follow the path they show them.
All things considered, even though school tutor assist them in their academic field, parents are always their for their children no matter whatever the situation is. Their unconditional love for their offspring is always welcoming.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 231, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...reating children as a friend is crucial so as to guide them in whatever ways they could ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 590, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'are the best'.
Suggestion: are the best
... experience of life. Therefore, parents are best teacher although they do not attain tag...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, i feel, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2000.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 398.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02512562814 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54999751195 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532663316583 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1239803477 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2380952381 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9523809524 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47619047619 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115804116582 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435642020734 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480842219419 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0723889866719 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304279195297 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 231, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...reating children as a friend is crucial so as to guide them in whatever ways they could ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 590, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'are the best'.
Suggestion: are the best
... experience of life. Therefore, parents are best teacher although they do not attain tag...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, i feel, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2000.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 398.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02512562814 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54999751195 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532663316583 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1239803477 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2380952381 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9523809524 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47619047619 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115804116582 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435642020734 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480842219419 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0723889866719 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304279195297 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.