College years are the best time in person's life. Do you agree or disagree with the statement
most of the people believe that college years the most interesting time for students. The best part of college years that you are you just grow up and feel free. Personally, I believe that it is the most best period of maturation. when you are first stepping for into adulthood and understanding what good for you or trying to find yourself. I feel this way for several reasons, which I will explore on the following essay.
first of all, when you are starting your university life in another country like a international student, you are starting to take responcibility of yourself and keep up in everything. I strongly believe that many students find new friends and hang out together. In a college there is no teachers who always controlling you. For example, when I asked my sister about her university life, she told me it has two sides positive also negative. she said that positive sides are you are hang out with your friends, you will be free, there's not someone who would control and forbid sou to do anything. my sister starting to find new things and being more self-discipline, also take responcibilities about her, and nowadays she is stay strong and did not change her principles.
Secondly, in my opinion why the most people thinks that college life is the best time because when you are starting to study the subjects that you like more. For instance, when you are studying at school we have a lot of subject and also a lot of home assignments that you hate to do. I am really do not want to study all subjects at school and I am prefer studying only the subjects that connected with your future work. it will make you happier when you are studying in a sphere where you like more, and feeling yourself free and confident. I believe that it is most coolest time, when you are young and have a lot of new ideas which you are going to realize step to step.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that college years the best time for your dream became reality. this is because you are studying in a sphere where you are like most and feeling yourself free and confident.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 24.0 11.0286738351 218% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1711.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 377.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53846153846 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55037822195 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461538461538 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 533.7 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6997510106 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0555555556 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9444444444 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256232334079 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968445766983 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690683748358 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17840909479 0.150856017488 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333974484289 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.76 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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