Nowadays, a lot of companies are building more and more factories. This is almost always good for several reasons mostly due to the fact that improve and develop the city, but sometimes can be a drawback for some people when factories are building near our community. I think this way because a couple of reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, when companies building factories increase the number of opportunities to getting a job. Building factories take a big role in increasing employment rate. In some way improve people’s life when companies giving an opportunity to working. For example, I was looking for a job some months ago, and I achieved my goal in a factory next to my house, I still work in that job, and I do not think to out there. Moreover, local people often have priority to being hired.
On the other hand, when the factories are being built usually doing many noises during all day even night in some cases. Almost for sure, these noises annoying all people surrounding that building. For instance, my friends always complained when they need to study for a test to college or even when they watching television. My mother always complained when the noises beginning in the morning and she could not more sleep. Furthermore, when the factories are being building or even after, they could create harmful effects on the environment. For example, the factories’ waste in most cases contaminates the environment and this is too dangerous for people around.
Finally concluding, factories are important for the people when they looking for an opportunity, but in some way, those buildings can get worse people’s life when still being building, with their loud noises and some other inconveniences when affecting the environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 39, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER
Message: The adverb 'usually' is usually put between 'are' and 'being'.
Suggestion: are usually being built
... On the other hand, when the factories are being built usually doing many noises during all day even n...
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
... is too dangerous for people around. Finally concluding, factories are important for...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, still, for example, for instance, i think, first of all, in most cases, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 298.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04697986577 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80579457934 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540268456376 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8858360112 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.266666667 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8 5.45110844103 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130940496921 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056581177773 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451609231621 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959727441565 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379518686822 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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