Most countries improving their economy by focusing in the manufacturing however, government most the time support this kind of investment and give a lot of facility to attract investors.
Initially, I will start with advantage, there are many advantages for building a factory in our community. However, every residential area close to the factory will have a lot of chances to improve the infrastructure and make a greet development in many aspect in our live. For instances, the city income will increase and that will open the way for many new investment and open many opportunities for local residential. Also, it will be a lot of great jobs for our community and that will decrease the rate of the unemployment. Furthermore, it will be a change in our social community cause the movement of the people back and forth to the factory. More than that, some factories give support for the student to be able to applied their carer before graduate from college. In many ways having a factory in our community will open the door for all the community .
Moreover, we have many advantage for opening a factory in our community but in the other hand, we have many disadvantage however, opening factory will make a lot of issues like, it will be many traffic and it will be many heavy tracks passing from our area. Also, it will be a lot of people coming from different places and that will increase the cost of the rant. Opening a new factory will affect our environment and it will be a enormous environment pollution and it will elevated the temperature. In the same way it will be a lot of health problems specially if this company will throw the factory wast in the sea or bury them in the earth.
In my conclusion, I think opening a factory in our community will be a great chance that can help us to build a cohesive society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 227, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... to improve the infrastructure and make a greet development in many aspect in our live....
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Line 3, column 250, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun aspect seems to be countable; consider using: 'many aspects'.
Suggestion: many aspects
...ructure and make a greet development in many aspect in our live. For instances, the city in...
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Line 3, column 862, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...will open the door for all the community . Moreover, we have many advantage for...
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Line 5, column 19, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun advantage seems to be countable; consider using: 'many advantages'.
Suggestion: many advantages
...ll the community . Moreover, we have many advantage for opening a factory in our community ...
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Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun disadvantage seems to be countable; consider using: 'many disadvantages'.
Suggestion: many disadvantages
...ommunity but in the other hand, we have many disadvantage however, opening factory will make a lo...
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Line 5, column 190, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[2]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun traffic seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much traffic', 'a good deal of traffic'.
Suggestion: much traffic; a good deal of traffic
...l make a lot of issues like, it will be many traffic and it will be many heavy tracks passin...
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Line 5, column 431, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...l affect our environment and it will be a enormous environment pollution and it w...
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Line 5, column 476, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'elevate'
Suggestion: elevate
...rmous environment pollution and it will elevated the temperature. In the same way it wil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, i think, kind of, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 325.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65230769231 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.735900559 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461538461538 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 502.2 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.3894315287 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.307692308 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106483676999 0.236089414692 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552088679623 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445802392141 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0735634401216 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0181782270613 0.0645574589148 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 10.002688172 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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