Most countries improving their economy by focusing in the manufacturing however, government most the time support this kind of investment and give a lot of facility to attract investors.
Initially, there are many advantages for building a factory in our community. However, every residential area close to the factory will have a lot of chances to improve the infrastructure and make a greet development in many aspect in our live. For instances, the city income will increase and that will open the way for many new investment and open many opportunities for local residential. Also, it will be a lot of great jobs for our community and that will decrease the rate of the unemployment. Furthermore, it will be a change in our social community cause the movement of the people back and forth to the factory. More than that, some factories give support for the student to be able to applied their carer before graduate from college. In many ways having a factory in our community will open the door for all the community .
Moreover, we have many advantage for opening a factory in our community but in the other hand, we have many disadvantage however, opening factory will make a lot of issues like, it will be many traffic and it will come many heavy tracks also, it will be a lot of people from different places. Opening a new factory will affect our environment and it will be a enormous environment pollution and it will elevated the temperature. In the same way it will be a lot of health problems specially if this company will throw the factory wast in the sea or bury them in the earth.
In my conclusion, I think opening a factory in our community will be a great chance that can help us to build a cohesive society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 198, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... to improve the infrastructure and make a greet development in many aspect in our live....
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Line 3, column 221, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun aspect seems to be countable; consider using: 'many aspects'.
Suggestion: many aspects
...ructure and make a greet development in many aspect in our live. For instances, the city in...
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Line 3, column 833, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...will open the door for all the community . Moreover, we have many advantage fo...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... open the door for all the community . Moreover, we have many advantage for ope...
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Line 5, column 19, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun advantage seems to be countable; consider using: 'many advantages'.
Suggestion: many advantages
...l the community . Moreover, we have many advantage for opening a factory in our community ...
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Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun disadvantage seems to be countable; consider using: 'many disadvantages'.
Suggestion: many disadvantages
...ommunity but in the other hand, we have many disadvantage however, opening factory will make a lo...
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Line 5, column 190, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[2]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun traffic seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much traffic', 'a good deal of traffic'.
Suggestion: much traffic; a good deal of traffic
...l make a lot of issues like, it will be many traffic and it will come many heavy tracks als...
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Line 5, column 237, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...affic and it will come many heavy tracks also, it will be a lot of people from di...
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Line 5, column 360, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...l affect our environment and it will be a enormous environment pollution and it w...
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Line 5, column 405, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'elevate'
Suggestion: elevate
...rmous environment pollution and it will elevated the temperature. In the same way it wil...
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Line 5, column 466, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ure. In the same way it will be a lot of health problems specially if this compan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, i think, kind of, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 306.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67320261438 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77048804098 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 212.727598566 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467320261438 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 478.8 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.7315213714 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.166666667 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 5.45110844103 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113469582024 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063338751871 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536434410249 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0765921567625 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0209487732358 0.0645574589148 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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