A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.
In this modern era, factories are necessary because they are used t manufacture things which are the basic need of humans. Some people are inclined toward the attitude that factories should be build in residential area, so it will be easy for employees to go on job, whereas others have the opposite perspective. I personally, though, believe that huge building must be build far away from the community, as it have a lot of waste with some dangerous chemicals. In the following essay, I intend to put forth my points and reasons of support.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that, if any company takes a contract to build a factory in the area where people live around is not safe. The factories always pollute the environment which is not good for health of individuals. To exemplify, few years back I went to my cousins house and first it looked so good and my cousin told me, she bought such a big home only in 80000 I was so amazed. In addition she setup the bbq system for dinner, later I felt suffocated as I am suffering from asthma then she told me that their is a factory at the end of the second street. I realized the waste of factories create many hazardous fumes which makes your air polluted. Thus, this example illustrates that such factories should be avoided to build in society.
Secondly, the machines in the factories creates a lot of noise that leads to the noise pollution. In the hometowns there are thousands of people who have insomnia, heart problem, autism or anxiety such people can not tolerate this situation. For instance, my friends is a little autistic and can not hear a lot voice otherwise she gets panic attack which is life threatning and in factories there is not a specific time of working they are open 24 hours and machines keep moving which creates really harsh noise and people who suffers from lack of sleep if want to sleep in daytime of or any other time they even can not get proper sleep. Therefore, this instance elucidates the disadvantage of setting up factory in the housing complex.
To wrap up, I believe that there is not a single advantage of establishing a factory in living area as it creates different types of pollutions which are sometimes lethal for people. Government only allow the organizations to make factories only in area which is far away from home.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, whereas, for instance, in addition, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1924.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 414.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64734299517 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58045186464 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54347826087 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 615.6 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.3240371616 48.9658058833 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.25 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.875 20.6045352989 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0625 5.45110844103 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160650009182 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604914287298 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385344974582 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0949880088932 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287961779062 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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