A company has announced that it wishes to build a new factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.
I, personally, support the decision the decision of building the new factory in the premises of the community. The decision has tremendous implications on the community. There are far more positive than the negative influences of the factory on the community.
The factory will help in economic growth of the society depended on it and thus pave way for an overall healthy economic growth. It will provide a stable income for the families depending on it. As the income will grow, it will create a more stable life for the residents and lead to an overall development of the people.
Along with it, the company will also lead to the development of the area in which it is located. By providing better public amenities like schools, public transportation, etc, will enhance the value of locality and create a sustainable growth for the future generations to come. An excellent example of such type of development is emergence of Jamshedpur. It came into existence as a well-planned city, thanks to the contributions of The Tata Industries. The company had set up a steel manufacturing plant in the locality. As the factory grew, it led to the development of Jamshedpur as it received multiple benefits in the form of infrastructure, transportation, civic amenities like schools, parks, etc. The community depending on the factory, too, had a healthy growth because of the strong efforts put by the company towards its people. The efforts taken by the company has borne fruits and Jamshedpur is considered to be one of the best planned cities in India.
Though the factory may have multiple positive implications on the society, it still has some adverse effects on its surroundings. The environment may get affected badly if no proper attention is paid to the effluents discharged by the factory. It may result in bad air quality or the degraded quality of water to its people. But, this all depends on how concerned the company is to the outcomes. If the company does care about the surroundings, then it will ensure that no inimical actions are taken by it.
Hence, it can be said that setting up a factory surely improves the lifestyle of the community in which it is located and can be a vital contributor to the overall development of the society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'the decision'.
Suggestion: the decision
I, personally, support the decision the decision of building the new factory in the prem...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, still, then, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1875.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 383.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8955613577 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95548902301 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490861618799 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 613.8 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.414059926 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.75 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.15 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.7 5.45110844103 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126589672395 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436450545764 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596022165952 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.083018367722 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0887514160732 0.0645574589148 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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