Many people visit museums when they travel to new places. Why do you think people visit museums? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Many people visit museums when they travel to new places. Why do you think people visit museums? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Travelling is the integrated part of the human nature. It arises due to curiosity of people to find new places, to explore new things and have all different kind of experiences. The people get to know about different things, interact with different set of people and relish the fresh social experiences. Thus, it is necessary for the human to travel and to open new quests of knowledge.
Museums are a form of attraction for the tourists. These are the places where the people can have deep insight of the history of the place, about some specific era which had an impact on history, etc. this doesn’t mean that the museums are always related to the history. They can be associated with different fields like science, literature, archaeology, and much more.
The museums attract people from all ages, from the school going children to the aged ones. This is due to the wide variety of things it has to offer. For example, the science museums are an informative as well as an entertaining form of experience for the students visiting those. They learn about a variety of things which they had not through before. This increases their willingness to think differently and results in better development. On the other hand, the museums related to literature are always a treat for the art lovers. They quench their thirst by exploring the field and also do find an inspiration in their works
Also, museums are an important institution to preserve the historical as well as significant artefacts. Various ancient or unique artefacts can easily be found in museums. This gives an opportunity for the general public to have a glimpse of the rare artefacts.
Thus, people visit museums not only for the entertainment purpose but also to gain knowledge about certain things they are really interested about.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 207, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...eums. This gives an opportunity for the general public to have a glimpse of the rare artefacts...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, thus, well, as to, for example, kind of, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 304.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95723684211 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69213026368 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542763157895 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1268189204 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7222222222 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8888888889 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38888888889 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235420544689 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670769385201 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454739551732 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129365721598 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518560000648 0.0645574589148 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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