compare and contrast your way of living with that of your parents. which way life do you think would be more satisfying to future generations?
There is lots of difference from the way I live and my parents due to the generation gap. A lot of things are evolved and society changed, the computation level is increased, technology and a lot more. Perhaps, I would prefer the way I live would be more satisfying for future generation because of following reasons.
First of all, there is a drastic change in technology . for instance, I would prefer reading news or watch movies on my mobile or laptop, which cover almost all the information and it helps me to be up to date but my parents prefer reading a newspaper which may not cover everything. In addition, I know how to make use of technology likewise, I use mobile to make a call, use social media to keep in touch, read news, watch movies, play games, learn new things on the internet , but my parents are not updated in using it. They would rather prefer to make a phone call nothing else.
Secondly, I like to travel, visit different places, learn new culture explore things, but my parents prefer to stay in home hardly they go out home, they font show much interest in trying new things. For example, last year we went to Dubai with my parents they didn't like it that much, they complained about the food, culture .they are happy staying at home. Moreover, I like to go out with my friends, meet new people but as per my notice, my parents like there own company they don't go out frequently if there is no work to do.
Considering all the above reason, I would say it will be more satisfying for future generation to live like me because after few years the technology is going to evolve a lot more than now, they need to be updated and fast to meet the competition in world or else we will be left behind.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, likewise, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 319.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43573667712 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4121968265 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539184952978 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.1999412907 48.9658058833 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.636363636 100.406767564 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.6045352989 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4545454545 5.45110844103 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165940077491 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780128778615 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10158060835 0.0737576698707 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12990994264 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101652108385 0.0645574589148 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.1575268817 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 86.8835125448 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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