Computers in recent two decades have been extended very much in worldwide which causes some people protest advent of this technology and many welcome that. There are many comments about positive and negative effects of computer in our life but I agree with this statement says this device makes life easier than past and I explain my opinion in following reasons.
First of all, computer as one of the most remarkable invention of human being has increased welfare in many societies with removing many unnecessary activities. It also helps many industries like manufacturing, services by doing many jobs instead of people while we can see artificial intelligence in production of goods and providing services to communities. For example nowadays smart cars as we know automobile without driver have been developed to improve quality of living by driving our cars in cities as a driver and we can just sit and enjoy our trips.
Secondly, computers introduce internet to recent world as an outstanding project which even changed our behavior. They prepare network ability for creating an environment which we call internet and help persons to do many works as online without requiring their physical presence. For instance we can buy any goods by online shopping by internet or communicate with our friends and relatives in social medias or watch movies by not going cinema easily and this makes our lifestyle more comfortable and convenience in comparison with last years in absent of computers.
Finally, computers add more quality to many things by producing creativity, efficiency and accuracy with their features. This instrument converts the engineering from precision with rate of seventy percent to ninety five, it rises efficiency in professional work to eighty percent and this would not happen only by aid of computer. Researchers have admitted that human can not reach these metrics however he is super hero or anything else.
In conclusion, we can not neglect importance of this smart apparatus in our processes while it may has some bad affects on our universe. We know children should not use computer devices more than a limit or it has made people unemployed by removing many activities and tasks but influence of this creation is undeniable and governments must plan to develop fair usability and availability to all segments of society as a popular technology to every one.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 384, Rule ID: THIS_NNS
Message: Did you mean 'this metrics' or ''?
Suggestion: this metrics;
... have admitted that human can not reach these metrics however he is super hero or anything el...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2014.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 389.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17737789203 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76861724339 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60411311054 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 655.2 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.1247632829 48.9658058833 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.923076923 100.406767564 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.9230769231 20.6045352989 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 5.45110844103 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150758999969 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540688228035 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0891617375434 0.0737576698707 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0896741194537 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100903572732 0.0645574589148 156% => OK
automated_readability_index: 17.9 11.7677419355 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 58.1214874552 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.1575268817 156% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.01818996416 119% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 86.8835125448 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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