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D/A To remain happy and optimistic when you fail is more important than achieving success.

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It is well known that failure is always followed by success, just like the thunder is always followed by the rainbow. Therefore, if we lack courage and optimism to dispel the thick clouds of the failure, we never have chance to bathe in the sunshine of the success. From my perspective, optimism in the failure matters more than that in the success, because it is the force that motivates you to keep going. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.

First of all, optimism is a key that turns the failure into success. It is well known that failure is the mother of success. However, not all the failure can turn automatically into success, especially when you give up. And then comes to ...

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