Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To remain happy and optimistic when you fail is more important than achieving success.
As time passes and people become more developed, the competitions between people are very fierce. Everyone wants to achieve success, because it can bring us the sense of achievement or something like that. Some people inclined toward the opinion that it is impossible to remain optimistic when an individual experiences a failure; However, some others may take an opposite viewpoint and believe that it is possible and it is more important to be happy in achieving the success. I, for one, subscribe to the idea that to remain happy and optimistic when you fail is more important than achieving success. In the following paragraph, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that, almost all of us would encounter problems and difficulties before we succeed in the end. There is no one that has never failed to do everything, but the spirits of optimism and perseverance are vital for us when we fail to do something. After all, only those who remain optimistic when they are facing failures and keeping fighting could finally achieve success; for instance, during the life of inventing, Edison encountered so many failures, while he never broke down for them; in the contrast, he regarded them as the essential ways to pass, managing them with pleasure and confidence, all of which leaded to his ultimate success. So, accessing to prosperity will be possible. Optimistic people receive the best rewards of the world, because the world is belonged to prosperous people who are deserved for it.
Nonetheless, no one could neglect that the fact that There is no deny that lots of advantage will come with the achievement of success; To illustration, the reputation, status and also the respect from other people. The more people achieve success, the more lead them to happiness essentially. However, the above argument does not constitute sufficient support to claim that to be happy in achieving the success is more important because as I have outlined earlier, there exist outstanding merits in remaining happy and optimistic when they fail. Constantly, the noteworthy statistics, revealed by a recent social research conducted in my country, show that having a happy soul can raise up the brain’s performance. When a person can joy everything, his brain will be able to concentrate on his goals.
To sum up, one can draw conclusion that it is well known that failure is always followed by success, just like the thunder is always followed by the rainbow.to keep happy and optimistic is not only the key factor that leads to success, but also an important thing that makes our mind far away from worry and loneliness. Although other sides of this opinion make sense to be acceptable, I believe that being happy and optimistic when you fail outweigh remaining joyful when you are prosperous people. Of course, to better assess the topic and its consequences in different aspects of life, more scientific approaches need to be applied through vast researches among all different culture.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'nonetheless', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'after all', 'for instance', 'of course', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.178875638842 0.229887763892 78% => OK
Verbs: 0.180579216354 0.158761421928 114% => OK
Adjectives: 0.102214650767 0.0866891130778 118% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0528109028961 0.046263068375 114% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0579216354344 0.0685040099705 85% => OK
Prepositions: 0.107325383305 0.118717715034 90% => OK
Participles: 0.0425894378194 0.0351676179071 121% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.78569532694 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0391822827939 0.0309702414327 127% => OK
Particles: 0.00511073253833 0.00188951952338 270% => OK
Determiners: 0.0868824531516 0.0887237588012 98% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0204429301533 0.0209618222197 98% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0272572402044 0.0139019557991 196% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3188.0 2387.08602151 134% => OK
No of words: 526.0 408.028673835 129% => OK
Chars per words: 6.0608365019 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78901763229 4.48200974243 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.351711026616 0.338922669872 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.285171102662 0.251872472559 113% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.228136882129 0.174417080927 131% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.152091254753 0.112833075102 135% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78569532694 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 272.0 212.727598566 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51711026616 0.524397521467 99% => OK
Word variations: 62.6013304616 59.2087087015 106% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 26.3 20.5533526081 128% => OK
Sentence length SD: 90.9092267044 48.84282405 186% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 159.4 120.699889404 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3 20.5533526081 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 0.644075263715 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 54.8171102662 45.7405998639 120% => OK
Elegance: 1.12865497076 1.45489161554 78% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.433622908627 0.300154397459 144% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0990111622469 0.103427244359 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0671203097778 0.0752933317313 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.527981800301 0.497263757937 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.152512215554 0.151897553556 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.20616943938 0.114077575197 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.246618798414 0.0781384742642 316% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.463881494114 0.336927656856 138% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0214372095746 0.067059652881 32% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.389348541353 0.210909579961 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.177730114378 0.0618886996521 287% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 14.0 8.42114695341 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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