There are many important days in our lives each one has its importance like, married day, high school graduation, having the first baby. Deeply deliberating about these days, I believe that the day that I graduated from the college is among the most important days in my entire life, and the following discussion reveals my stand and reasoning.
First of all, I felt so excited at that day because I was done with all exams and study's frustrations. For example, I studied for five years in the pharmacy college in Baghdad university. Our study was so hard, we needed to do a lot of assignments and researches each years besides all other exams in order to graduate. I was so exhausted by all this study. So, in my graduation day, I felt for the first time with that much of happiness because there won't be anymore studies and exams. As you could see, finishing all these requirements wasn't easy after all, but the reward was so big and deserve all that work.
Second, the graduation day from the pharmacy college was so important because at that day I started the adult's life, or in other words, I start my career as a pharmacist, it's like a dream come true. For instance, When I was in the high school, I have had the dream of being a pharmacist one day. I studied for a long time and with a long hours each day, until I was able to get the high grade, that allow me to enter the pharmacy college. In the college, It was even harder, all our classes were in English and we needed to communicate inside the campus in English too. So, the graduation day was a far dream come true. I was able to get my pharmacy license on that day and I remember that I applied for a job directly after having my license. From this experience I could say that the best day in anybody's life is when his dream come true, especially if he works so hard to make it true.
In conclusion, even though each person has different day in his life that considered as the most important one, as for me the graduation day from the college is the most important day. Not only was I so excited to finish all exams and hard work. But also it was the day that I start to be a real pharmacist.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: wasn't
...d see, finishing all these requirements wasnt easy after all, but the reward was so b...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'adults'' or 'adult's'?
Suggestion: adults'; adult's
...rtant because at that day I started the adults life, or in other words, I start my car...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'hour'?
Suggestion: hour
...studied for a long time and with a long hours each day, until I was able to get the h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, second, so, after all, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1760.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 407.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32432432432 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44578520507 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.454545454545 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 558.0 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4702310876 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7777777778 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6111111111 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244343991972 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941987584496 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622029149713 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191789701149 0.150856017488 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657689212519 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.07 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.78 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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