Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more likely for people with more skills to succeed.
There is no doubt that skills play an important role in our futures. People who possess unprecedented skills are more likely hired at high ranking job positions. Although some people think that skills have nothing to do with our chances to get jobs, I think physical, mental and language are the most important skills that affects our life significantly.
Physical skills play a crucial role in our future. For example, people who are physcially fit are more likely to look healthier and live longer. Thus, this will give them the chance to experience success compare wiyh those who are phyiscally weak. For example, a friend of mine were keen to excercis and eat healthy. As a result, he developed a fantastic body shape and strong muscles to qulify him to do preform exeptional physical abilities. Due to his physical skills, he is currently one of the key players at our university football team. If he was unskilled, he probably would miss the chance to be a famous and sucessful player.
In addition to the importance of physical fitness, mental skill is another factor that help people to succeed. People who showes exception mental skills are more likely to get high ranking job position in our country. For instance, students who are possess the ability to solve complicated math problems or those who are skilled in physics and chemistry, are more likely to work for NASA. Yet, students can also get hired as a detectives or as a police officers. Possessing certain skills could have a great influence in people live's.
finally, we should not neglect the effect of language skills in future development and success. People who have the ability to speak more than one language, are more likely communicate with different culture around the world. For instance, business men who is speakes English, Arabic and Chiness is more likely to seal great business deals compare to those who speakes only english. Also, People who have body language skills are more likely to be successful sales representatives. For instance, because I can speak clearly and coherently with a smile, I was one of the best salesman in our company. As a result, I got extra insentive for my excptional sales.
As a conclusion, we can safely say that even though some people believe that relationships and luck are the main factors for their success, skills are significanlty important to reach our fianl goals
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students who are possess the ability
students who are possessing the ability
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Sentence: For example, people who are physcially fit are more likely to look healthier and live longer.
Error: physcially Suggestion: physically
Sentence: Thus, this will give them the chance to experience success compare wiyh those who are phyiscally weak.
Error: phyiscally Suggestion: physically
Error: wiyh Suggestion: wish
Sentence: For example, a friend of mine were keen to excercis and eat healthy.
Error: excercis Suggestion: exercise
Sentence: As a result, he developed a fantastic body shape and strong muscles to qulify him to do preform exeptional physical abilities.
Error: qulify Suggestion: qualify
Error: exeptional Suggestion: exceptional
Sentence: If he was unskilled, he probably would miss the chance to be a famous and sucessful player.
Error: sucessful Suggestion: successful
Sentence: People who showes exception mental skills are more likely to get high ranking job position in our country.
Error: showes Suggestion: showed
Sentence: For instance, business men who is speakes English, Arabic and Chiness is more likely to seal great business deals compare to those who speakes only english.
Error: speakes Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: english Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: As a result, I got extra insentive for my excptional sales.
Error: excptional Suggestion: exceptional
Error: insentive Suggestion: inventive
Sentence: As a conclusion, we can safely say that even though some people believe that relationships and luck are the main factors for their success, skills are significanlty important to reach our fianl goals
Error: significanlty Suggestion: significantly
Error: fianl Suggestion: final
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 15 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 23 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 15 2
No. of Sentences: 22 15
No. of Words: 403 350
No. of Characters: 1941 1500
No. of Different Words: 209 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.48 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.816 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.554 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 155 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 103 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 61 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 36 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.318 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.476 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.682 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.327 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.503 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.133 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...role in our future. For example, people who are physcially fit are more likely to look ...
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Line 3, column 224, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...o experience success compare wiyh those who are phyiscally weak. For example, a friend ...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 242, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
... in our country. For instance, students who are possess the ability to solve complicat...
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Line 5, column 249, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... country. For instance, students who are possess the ability to solve complicated...
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Line 5, column 251, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'possessed'.
Suggestion: possessed
...ountry. For instance, students who are possess the ability to solve complicated math p...
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Line 5, column 427, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a detective' or simply 'detectives'?
Suggestion: a detective; detectives
...SA. Yet, students can also get hired as a detectives or as a police officers. Possessing cer...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Finally
...e a great influence in people lives. finally, we should not neglect the effect of la...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'finally', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'thus', 'for example', 'for instance', 'i think', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'no doubt', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.244394618834 0.229887763892 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.156950672646 0.158761421928 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.109865470852 0.0866891130778 127% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0515695067265 0.046263068375 111% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0515695067265 0.0685040099705 75% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0964125560538 0.118717715034 81% => OK
Participles: 0.0156950672646 0.0351676179071 45% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.65626234965 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.042600896861 0.0309702414327 138% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0695067264574 0.0887237588012 78% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0156950672646 0.0209618222197 75% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0269058295964 0.0139019557991 194% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2400.0 2387.08602151 101% => OK
No of words: 403.0 408.028673835 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.95533498759 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.48200974243 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.39205955335 0.338922669872 116% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.27047146402 0.251872472559 107% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.183622828784 0.174417080927 105% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.104218362283 0.112833075102 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65626234965 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523573200993 0.524397521467 100% => OK
Word variations: 58.5632270959 59.2087087015 99% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.3181818182 20.5533526081 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9849403469 48.84282405 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.090909091 120.699889404 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3181818182 20.5533526081 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.590909090909 0.644075263715 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.54480286738 126% => OK
Readability: 45.3653282202 45.7405998639 99% => OK
Elegance: 1.37068965517 1.45489161554 94% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333149556323 0.300154397459 111% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.077472843968 0.103427244359 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0530830159518 0.0752933317313 71% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.466922512892 0.497263757937 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.174408430254 0.151897553556 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113867589138 0.114077575197 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676876134987 0.0781384742642 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.318455344329 0.336927656856 95% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0883503076452 0.067059652881 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212569676554 0.210909579961 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716566285835 0.0618886996521 116% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8870967742 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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