Disagree or agree It is impossible to be completely honest with your friend

Being completely honest, an important element of quality life, has been valued and even triggers a heated discussion over treating with your friend. Telling some white lies to your friend, in some people's view, is necessary. Contrary to these opinions is my perspective is that it is possible to be completely honest with the friend, due to contributions to know about yourself deeply and build a close relationship with the friend.

What must be prioritized first is that do not treat with your friend, instead of lying to them, will negatively influence the understanding of the people itself. To begin with, when interacting with your friend, some shortage and weakness will be explored. To be more specific, we can fix these problems and became a friendly and perfect person; however, these shortage will grow to a big trouble if we ignored them. Moreover, it is a very good chance to release your stress. In detail, talking about your thoughts and worries alter the level of stress; on the contrary, without extremely honest to the friend, people will undergo a diverse level of stress.

What is equally worth discussing is that dealing with the friend in completely honesty, rather than not, will exert a positive effect on the relationship with the friend. Initially, it is well-known that an honest friend is a reliable partner. Specifically, honesty is a good way to maintain a steady connection with other; on the other hand, some distance will created if you treat your friends in a dishonest way. Additionally, a reliable friend is always a strong shoulder. To explain it further, a good fame of honesty, will broaden your friend circle and became popular.

Understanding ablout yourself, promoted by your friend, will be deep and improve your personality.
Building a close relationship with others, provoked by your goog fame, will inhanced by your trustworthy acivities. To conclude, only by completely honesty with a friend can people know about itself deeply and build a close relationship with your firiend.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 356, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this shortage' or 'these shortages'?
Suggestion: this shortage; these shortages
...a friendly and perfect person; however, these shortage will grow to a big trouble if we ignore...
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Line 6, column 363, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'create'
Suggestion: create
...; on the other hand, some distance will created if you treat your friends in a dishones...
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Line 6, column 397, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a dishonest way" with adverb for "dishonest"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... will created if you treat your friends in a dishonest way. Additionally, a reliable friend is alw...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, so, well, talking about, on the contrary, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1707.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 333.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12612612613 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80190318753 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51951951952 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.905984087 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.6875 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8125 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8125 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.427846947284 0.236089414692 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168314058821 0.076458572812 220% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805789510215 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.280072589847 0.150856017488 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638204878432 0.0645574589148 99% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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