do you agree or disagree about following statement: “ Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than the way these days ”
Knowledge and science are the most important factors for each country or society to develop its member’s life styles. Improving technology, means of facilitating life, etc. obtained by knowledge and science and these are just could be conveyed by teachers. By passes of time teachers, regardless of their degree (primary teacher or university professor) play crucial rules to convey this knowledge to the next generation. In my opinion, teachers either in present time or future, counted as a respectful and valued member of community rather past. Therefore I generally disagree about the question statement. The reasons and examples have been provided as follow.
First, nowadays, the value of science and being educated are felt more by people. It’s very important for each community that has expertise, because special tasks and missions only are accomplished by educated and professional persons, and who educated these people, absolutely teachers. Teachers are the type of mankind who are able to communicate with their student and explain them all things of this world and its phenomena in a comprehensible way for their students. Therefore, as the world needs for more educated person they have to respect their teachers. However, in past the ability to reading and writing just required and this is not an important problem and did not need specific teachers and may be taught by parents even.
Second, by growth of population, the number of science seeker increases and respectively society wants more teachers. If the levels of teachers is not appropriate and if their life condition are not favorable for them, no one would accept to become a teacher. Thus the government and mostly parents respects teachers these days than past. Now teachers are graded by their level place they teach in there from primary schools to universities. Teachers of primary schools are respected from parents of child because their child expend a quarter of daily time with teachers in schools and teachers responsible for their initial knowledge. And also professors in university mainly respected by the government and students because the vital task, required science for developing society and prepare young student to become expert in specific jobs are the universities professor duty.
Finally one of the great leaders (Angela Mercel) said that: “we should respect and make life easier for people who taught us”.
To summaries, by considering aforementioned reasons and undeniable crucial rules of teachers to improving and developing each country. I disagree with the statement.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Therefore,
...valued member of community rather past. Therefore I generally disagree about the question...
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Suggestion: Thus,
...o one would accept to become a teacher. Thus the government and mostly parents respe...
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... become expert in specific jobs are the universities professor duty. Finally one of the g...
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Suggestion: Finally,
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, thus, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 13.8261648746 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2200.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 407.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40540540541 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77931400243 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528255528256 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 679.5 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0939827819 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.761904762 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.380952381 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90476190476 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219050013727 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697457092422 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501989817306 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118563775509 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255631897228 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 10.9000537634 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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