Do you agree or disagree? To be successful people should be creative

Every individual has own way of thinking towards life. Everyone has something different. It is very important that people can recognize that inner ability and work accordingly. Some argue that creativity in people helps them to achieve success easily in life. Others hold the different opinion that creativity is not only a factor in order to get success. There are other important factors which play a crucial role in one's life. From my perspective, the former view contains more weight. I take the position on account for the following reasons.
Primarily, the creative mind works efficiently in a different perspective in various places. Mind full of creativity always has a lot of meaningful ideas and thoughts. People can apply their knowledge as well as the thought process in meaningful ways in order to get success. It is more likely that people who have different idea able to achieve their goal easily compared to the people who are hard working. To illustrate this more, when I was in high school, one of my classmates was so different from others and he was so creative as well as intelligent. His way of working for the different task always made him special among all the teachers. On top of that, he used to score well in all the exam in the school. All the students included me was so impressed by him and always tried to think creatively as he used to think.
Furthermore, thinking in a different way and applying that in various field, at the advent of technological development opens up enormous opportunities for the people. person's creativity is always in demand whether it is a workplace or at the school place. Additionally, in the past few years, the competition has been increased among the people. Lots of people have been pursuing higher education and it becomes just so common that people are applying for their job with the higher academic designations. For instance, the company usually get more than a hundred job application from the people who have acquired the same higher designation. Hence, nowadays, people who are more creative with their higher degrees have more value compared to the people who just have their master’s degree. Since creative people have a higher ability to work efficiently, and also, their creativity helps the company to make a profit. Therefore, creative people have a better future in order to fortify their life in a specific career.
Admittedly, having discussed this issue from this point of view, I would rather look at it from another viewpoint. I think that there are other factors are also playing a vital role in people's life. people with creativity not always get success. Factors such as hard working are also important because when a mixture of different abilities combines together, it creates a huge impact on a particular task or area.
All in all, I strongly believe that creativity is really important in one's life in order to get easy success. Also, this is because it makes people different from the others and it helps them to survive at an utmost level compared to the other people in the same field.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, furthermore, hence, if, look, really, so, therefore, well, for instance, i think, such as, as well as, on top of that

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2569.0 1977.66487455 130% => OK
No of words: 525.0 407.700716846 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89333333333 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78673985869 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68317610559 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.457142857143 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 821.7 618.680645161 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9814367848 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6333333333 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53333333333 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 11.8709677419 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152078337855 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501085376892 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052674993822 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100393998882 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0119340111627 0.0645574589148 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 86.8835125448 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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