Do you agree or disagree? To be successful people should be creative
In the modern era, people want to accomplish something in life. All people cannot be successful until they do hard work, and also they are very creative. Although other people believe that only hard work is enough for success, I think that people must be creative in order to get the achievement. I feel this way because of a few reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, the creative mind has lots of ideas. People, who are very knowledgeable and intelligent, are more likely to get success. In the technological world, people need to be more forward in order to earn a high salary or get a goal. Therefore, if people are skillful, then they will be proved the best infield. For example, the employee is very intelligent. He is very flexible to carry out any type of work in the office. There are more chances for him to get promotion in his company. Additionally, people who are very talented, they could do anything very precisely. So, they are more prone to get success.
The second and the same exquisite proof for this assertion is creative people can learn easily. Thus, people need to be creative since they can learn things from the depth of the subject. Intelligent people can easily grasp the subject, so they are always demanding in the world. The research has been said people who are very successful or wealthy today, most of them were very potential in their education. For example, a student who always studies by understanding the ideas, he is a scholar in his school. Since he is very creative, he is also good in sports, art, and other activities. These types of people are always successful because of their masters in their subjects. Therefore, it goes without saying that to become successful people need creativity as well as hard work.
Finally, people should be hardworking as they are creative to achieve their goals. Hence, nobody can get success without hard work and luck, so several other factors are affecting them. Therefore, people have to strive to achieve success. However, creativity is an important quality in people.
By the way of the conclusion, based on the above-mentioned arguments, I am of the opinion that people should be creative in order to get a good job and to get the best education. This is because these are steps for success.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, hence, however, if, second, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, i feel, i think, as well as, by the way, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 15.1003584229 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1921.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 401.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79052369077 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63158800726 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481296758105 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 602.1 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5948344618 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.1481481481 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8518518519 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.51851851852 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 23.0 11.8709677419 194% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322739603241 0.236089414692 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952251823136 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835748426314 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223749982025 0.150856017488 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403796198447 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.91 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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