generally, people live longer due to advanced technology
In recent era, people are living longtime than past. There are many factors are responsible for this. Although the plethora of people holds the opinion that improvements in diet or changes in to education system have enhanced the people life, I think that technological improvements is the best factor to describe this. I feel this way because of few reasons which I will explore in following essay.
First of all, technological improvements have encouraged the scientists to find the new medicines, which are the able to fight against the diseases. In past days, medical was not this much forward that could be able to survive human's life. Technology has been found solution to increase the immunity power of human and the antigens, which are able to fight against the specific type of antibody. For instance, in nineteenth century, it was impossible to survive patient affected with tuberculosis. After, the invention of penicillin it is possible to save the patients.
The second and equally exquisite proof for this assertion is about high equipment. In modern world, there are many instruments available for the treatment of people. There are also basic equipment, which are usually used for the measurement of the pulse, blood pressure and diabetes. People often need to measure this vital signs, because of technology it is easy for them to note it at home. For example, blood pressure monitoring machines and diabetes measuring machines are available in markets. One can easily buy it from medical store, and they are not much expensive. Therefore, people can do basic checkup at home. This could help them to predict basic irregularities in their body.
Finally, the robotic surgery has been proved best method for save human life. Robotic surgery has taken place in major field. To illustrate this, in most of the neuron surgery, doctors prefer to do robotic surgery. This is because neurons are very sensitive and miniature part of our body. Thus, robotic surgery can increase the chances of survival of patient in complicated cases. However, diet regulation cannot the prevent the neuron’s damage. Since from that human can do some remedy to keep body healthy.
By the way of conclusion, based on above arguments, I believe that technological improvements has been changed the life of human. This is because it has encouraged the scientist to do researches, developed the equipment and enhance the technique of surgery. Therefore, it is useful in people to live long.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, by the way, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2095.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 406.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16009852217 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74894171991 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534482758621 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 679.5 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3685113235 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5925925926 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.037037037 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108889362343 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0314366157629 0.076458572812 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568585123083 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.073735467658 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540635317894 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 58.1214874552 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 86.8835125448 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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