do you agree or disagree businesses should hire employees for their entire lives
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Now a days every one should work hard to spend their life happily. In order that some of them start some businesses to have their own job. some people believe businesses should hire employees for their entire lives. I completely agree with this opinion and I have same reasons to support it.
First and important reason is that, some young people exist in every society who need job. By hiring this young people, we can make happier life for them. For instance, in my country exist a lot of people who graduate but they are unemployed so if businesses hire them we have less young people who don't have a job and also as I mentioned before, we have happier people in our society.
second reason is that, several people in a business can be more effective than one because they all attempt to improve their business. Thus, hire some employees for business can influence directly to a business improvement which is helps the business continue life.
Finally, By hiring employees for a business we have more thinkers which help each other to pass hard times that occur for the business. so it helps business to go on even if happen hard time.
In conclusion, I completely agree about that business should hire employees for their entire life because, by doing this we have less unemployed people in our society. second, by hiring more people we have more workers which attempt to make better business. The last one is that, we have more people who help each other in hard time and these make business alive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 52.1666666667 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 274.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80656934307 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54206708544 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 212.727598566 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481751824818 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 422.1 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0339564882 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2666666667 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.06666666667 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287718483968 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122424750858 0.076458572812 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131604490971 0.0737576698707 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141688555679 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109800844076 0.0645574589148 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 86.8835125448 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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