Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Now-a-days everything change quickly and people are deal with a lot of changes during their life. Although someone believes that this changes may make people to be less happy or less satisfied, I think these changes have some positive influence on our life because of the reasons which will be discussed in details below.
The first reason that supports my perspective is concerned with that fact that changing is always exiting. To be more specific, when something changes we experience new situation which is always exited for everyone. For example, now most of people has private smart mobile phone which is update every year that tacks opportunity to people to use the newest technology in word. On the other hand, ten years ago people had not smart mobile phone which it couldn't update. They just could change their mobile to use the newest technology on that time.
Another noteworthy point to be mentioned is that, There is a pscology fact that people who are deal with changes are more hopeful in compare with other who does not experience a lot of changes in their life. When someone is waiting to see some new things in his life, it helps him to has happier life with a lot of hopes. For instance, I really like car, I am always wait to see the newest car which is intruduse to the word. In other word this changes makes me to work hard to earn more money.
In conclusion, I completely disagree with the attitude that modern people are less happy or less satisfied with their lives because the word is changing so quickly. In my opinion these changes not only help people to have more exiting life, but also help them to be more hopeful in their life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 233, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...s exited for everyone. For example, now most of people has private smart mobile phone which is...
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Line 2, column 453, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...ple had not smart mobile phone which it couldnt update. They just could change their mo...
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Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...t, There is a pscology fact that people who are deal with changes are more hopeful in c...
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Line 3, column 368, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'waited'.
Suggestion: waited
...nstance, I really like car, I am always wait to see the newest car which is intrudus...
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Line 4, column 165, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ecause the word is changing so quickly. In my opinion these changes not only help ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, really, so, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 296.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63175675676 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29331680192 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513513513514 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1811457724 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.461538462 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 5.45110844103 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296713403308 0.236089414692 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118133462255 0.076458572812 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124192662228 0.0737576698707 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213046483018 0.150856017488 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0950355869731 0.0645574589148 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 86.8835125448 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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