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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? After high school students ahould have at least one year to work or travel. It is better that attending university straight away.

Essay topics: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? After high school students ahould have at least one year to work or travel. It is better that attending university straight away.

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During an education and especially in a high school there would be so many issues that affect students severely. After high school there would a few time maybe one or a couple of weeks to travel for students' relaxing. But that should not last a long.

First of all, the education is a process which done with students and their teachers, also that sometimes would be between children and their parents. And, that lasts a short and easy, in contrast if it lasts the long there would be much efforts which impact owners negatively. For that, communities of the education or the families of children have to concentrate their members' productivities highly and fiercely.

Also, there are so many ways including providing free time, giving more homework, etc. to build students up positively or effectively. Some parts of these ways use all over the world, but a few parts of them such as offering more free time used in a less countries such like a big and modern countries. And, that way which relax the students always influence their student mental health well. In contrast, if the students be in more free time there would be more failures than the other approaches.

In addition, in some countries, there are the way which use everyday homework that used by teachers. In that technique causes more stresses than the easy one. And, in some countries, there would be some jobs options which students work in their educations times, after the high school and before a university. Because, that work method increase their workers abilities up to the top, in these methods jobs there are a similar titles which about students education.

In conclusion, taking account of all above reasons and examples, I definitely do not agree both statements. All university Students neither travel nor work after the high school, they should travel a little before their starting time to university, and they should work in their education time.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 234, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...ast if it lasts the long there would be much efforts which impact owners negatively....
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Line 9, column 251, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun countries is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ch as offering more free time used in a less countries such like a big and modern co...
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Line 9, column 256, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'country'?
Suggestion: country
... offering more free time used in a less countries such like a big and modern countries. A...
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Line 13, column 102, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...veryday homework that used by teachers. In that technique causes more stresses tha...
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Line 13, column 427, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'title'?
Suggestion: title
... these methods jobs there are a similar titles which about students education. I...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1623.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 326.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97852760736 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53808545015 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521472392638 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3457863445 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4705882353 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1764705882 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82352941176 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171447970295 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585668688367 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591740358338 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113000123167 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614864323312 0.0645574589148 95% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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