Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The advice from the grandparents is of no use to their grandchildren because the world has changed a lot over the past 50 years.
The world and people in it have been changed rapidly for fifty years. An Education, a working, an entertainment, some behaviours and any other issues are designed by necessities where they are used.So, advises given by elders do not enough for their youngers.
First of all, in this era, there are several new technologies and tools in everywhere.These type of materials and products such as cell phones and computers are used alot than that lived before by young member's grandparents.These products are learned difficultly, their grandparents do not learn enoughly.I think that older members of younger's have not an idea about these issues.
Also, education is very different from several decades ago.In the past 50 years ago, the education is very a traditional, and there is a teacher and many students.In this type of education, rules, schedules and tools are the same in everywhere.Problems and solving of students homework are as the same as in anytime and anywhere.In this era, there are different problems about education and different efficient method for solving them.The Grandparents do not know how they do for in these educational life.
In addition, social life and behaviours in these places where people be together are much close than before.Before, people like play or mate not close, and they had been always seperately.And, they usually behave to each other carefully and ritually.Today, there are several close relationship between younger and they do not think concentrately.So, young individual acts freely in their social activities and environments where people be together.
In my opinion, taking account of all reasons, grandchildren do not listen their grandparent, because their advises not enough for their young adults.And, They always think that their grandparents do not know now, they always acting negatively to their olders.So, I definitely and clearly do not agree about that statement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, i think, in addition, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 302.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41059602649 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19632315845 2.67179642975 120% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543046357616 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6003584229 29% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 20.1344086022 248% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 149.855485941 48.9658058833 306% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 272.333333333 100.406767564 271% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.3333333333 20.6045352989 244% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.1666666667 5.45110844103 242% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17452380129 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896524360922 0.076458572812 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625575020835 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0937887408498 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637539959446 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.2 11.7677419355 248% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 12.27 58.1214874552 21% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.10430107527 239% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 10.1575268817 236% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.99 10.9000537634 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.01818996416 126% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.0 10.0537634409 219% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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