In twenty years, there will be fewer cars in use than there are today

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In twenty years, there will be fewer cars in use than there are today

Today, there are many cars and their producers in the world, and these companies and factories of cars produce them day by day, and their numbers increase regularly. that is process of production whose companies would apply for their trade, and they aim more income and more consuming them.

First of all, vehicles such as busses, planes, ships use gas in their consuming and working time, more cars too. And, these types of fossil fuels cause pollution than renewable sources such as sun, wind, etc. The pollution impact our climate condition, and It causes weather negatively. For that reason, the pollution is the most important problem for our communities and countries. For solving that problem, United Nations organization acted laws of consuming fuels, and they want to decrease them down. so, the one of the thoughts is declining cars.

Also, our world free spaces and enough areas go down, many new babies born time by time, as a result of these birth process the world's population improve highly. And, the world's roads and transportation spaces decreasing down, and people of the world will have been affected badly. And, they wild have not use their cars efficiently in their not enough roads. so, all governments have to figure these landscapes problems out, and they will urge using public transportations them in near future.

In addition, universities and countries always think new explorations which about new machines, new vehicles, new tools, new materials, etc. For that, they divide their budget for these new investments. And, there will be new flying machines or a quick travel machines in the world decades later. And, these kinds of travel things impact people's behaviours and abilities. May be, people not consider cars for a journey, because they travel rapidly with these new machines.

In conclusion, taking account of all above reasons, I definitely agree the statement that in twenty years, there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, may, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1663.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 325.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11692307692 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51304949245 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578461538462 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9742095358 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3888888889 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0555555556 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22180723936 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699225056582 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131266410097 0.0737576698707 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173469611988 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.203477707848 0.0645574589148 315% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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