do you agree or disagree with the following statement? because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well. use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Today, there are so many job titles including an engineering, a doctor, a teacher, a soldier, etc. in the world. These jobs are sometimes could be boring, and there could be hardly ever a few funny facilities. In free work areas people who has relations with them would work well and effectively, in contrast there are more failures in stressful jobs.
First of all, working and studying are necessity for their owners and their workers. For example, in universities there would be several assignments and some labrotary quizes which had to been done by students. And, all of these duties come from their authors. Although these students want to have a diploma some parts of them would like be graduate in a high level degree. For that reason, they ocassionaly face with different duties, and that situation cause some failures.
Also, in the busiest environments there would be several kinds of jobs which done by workers. All of these jobs would be finished in scheduled time. Because all of them planned by their leaders or bosses to their clients. Almost all companies which producing products to their consumer would like to earn more money, for that they always urge their employee for improving their performances. But, that often cause blood pressure and stress on employees. Then, that people whose have the high stress could make much fatal error to cause give off their agreements.
In addition, in companies and factories there are a lot of people who work at the same time, and that causes risk which affect their employees and a team leaders. These risky factors including diseases and mental health may impact landscapes' members. And, all of these problems should not be there, because their functionalities would be dropped by these problems.
In contrast, in free spaces where people work, there are more activities doing by their members, so their members mental features would be up. And their results always in a good lines.
In conclusion, taking account of all above reasons and examples, I definitely agree that statement people do few things in the harsh and crowded environments. Because, in that places, workers would not concentrate their jobs positively and severely.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...which affect their employees and a team leaders. These risky factors including diseases...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, then, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1857.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 364.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10164835165 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55965387889 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552197802198 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9085990858 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4090909091 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5454545455 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95454545455 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103903124977 0.236089414692 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0320361938917 0.076458572812 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559922085731 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.073351659571 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563433612411 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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