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Many high school students are doing a lot of school work already, Some people believe that students should help their parents with household chores, since it‘s the best way to give them a sense of responsibility.

Essay topics: Many high school students are doing a lot of school work already, Some people believe that students should help their parents with household chores, since it‘s the best way to give them a sense of responsibility.

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During the world life there would be several ways such as doing homework, looking after anybody, doing school work, etc. , all of these things used in different eras regularly or rarely. Some of them had been used in the past, but others still used today. Which one if the best It depend's on wherever, whenever, however they used.

First of all, a task is job which done by people who work in a companies, study in universities, or any other duties. And, some of these jobs are necessity because those are someone's responsibilities, some parts of them would done in need, but a few parts of them lasted for a fun. For example, in computer companies, there would be some planned codes which should been written by programmer, if that programs are not written at their schedule times there would be failure, also companies incomes could be dropped down.

In addition, students have different kinds of brain activities and behaviours including the fast asking, a low learning, etc. Almost all of these students have a young brain a few parts of them are clever than the others. Although all clever students have sharp brain the most parts of them hate working and studying hard. And they have not ample responsibility. For that school communities consider what they do at these situations. And, they find many different methods after their conventions and interviews.

Furthermore, there would be some techniques which improving students responsibilities created by teachers, authors, parents too. For example, in universities professors urge their students with various homeworks and assignments, because if students have free time they would do nothing without travelling, walking and playing games, and these duties cause more responsibility. In home, an old members of families always interested in their young members' behaviours and skills. For that, they encourage them in house works.

Moreover, some behaviours designed in pregnancies of women, because all of these types of features comes with genetic code in DNA. So, a high part of these behaviours not learned after a birth.

In conclusion, taking account of all reasons, I think the best way is not the do household chores. So, i do not agree that statement clearly and definitely.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 121, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...g after anybody, doing school work, etc. , all of these things used in different e...
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Line 1, column 180, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'rarely' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...ngs used in different eras regularly or rarely. Some of them had been used in the past...
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Line 5, column 62, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a company' or simply 'companies'?
Suggestion: a company; companies
...is job which done by people who work in a companies, study in universities, or any other du...
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Line 5, column 227, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[2]
Message: Did you mean 'have done' or 'do'?
Suggestion: have done; do
...ponsibilities, some parts of them would done in need, but a few parts of them lasted...
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Line 9, column 450, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... do at these situations. And, they find many different methods after their conventions and int...
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Line 13, column 394, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'member'?
Suggestion: member
...se more responsibility. In home, an old members of families always interested in their ...
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Line 13, column 524, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...at, they encourage them in house works. Moreover, some behaviours designed in pr...
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...e behaviours not learned after a birth. In conclusion, taking account of all rea...
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Line 21, column 75, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ll reasons, I think the best way is not the do household chores. So, i do not agree th...
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Line 21, column 104, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...way is not the do household chores. So, i do not agree that statement clearly and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, still, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1898.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 368.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15760869565 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78184512848 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.9520237033 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.380952381 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5238095238 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7619047619 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250778702316 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678907205296 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420633688561 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121952252961 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391167463356 0.0645574589148 61% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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