Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Today There are so many social activities and sports at universities and colleges, and these education places have many classes and libraries which used by students. All of them are necessary for members of these environments. And, Which one is more important than the other thing, this depend on where they used and what people want.
First of all, all students need some tools such as desk, chair, and board, and they need several different books which used for their a project assignments. And, for students' qualities and lessons' successes there must be good kinds of reading materials, and teaching tools which bought by universities' or colleges' managements. Then, there would be enough equipment if bosses of places think that rising their technologies.
Also, universities and colleges in some countries divided to different education parts, some parts concentrate social activities but other parts focus a science, a math, a biology. For that reason, budget of these schools are divided for their aims which about their concentrations. In scientific approach libraries have wealthy book material, in contrast there are much more social activities such like playing soccer, meeting in parties in other approach.
In addition, in education life students faced many stresses and they have boring time a lot. Because, they always study their lessons and assignments for making high grades. And, all these facilities impact a mental health of people of campuses badly and negatively. Their physical abilities could be collapsed due to these workings. And, These urge that campuses managements and governments have to solve these students problems. For figuring these concerns out, managements improve social activities in their schools, and governments send more money to universities for these activities.
In conclusion, taking account of all above reasons, I definitely agree that statement. All social activities as important as sports and other social activities, and all of them are necessary for students. And, governments should consider that improving their education payments up.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'several'.
Suggestion: several
...s desk, chair, and board, and they need several different books which used for their a project as...
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Line 3, column 129, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
... several different books which used for their a project assignments. And, for student...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1781.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 323.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51393188854 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78226390506 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541795665635 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2626483513 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9444444444 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9444444444 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109030713485 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0367214443889 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501413156196 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0762108461789 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510898589046 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 10.9000537634 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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