Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I do not agree that matter which given by author. There are many reasons which is tought by myself.
First, people always have to make decision for any kind of issues. For example, if people want to join a new company they should choose a good one of all options, for this they need before experiences which seen them. Also another example is choosing a new cell phone, sometimes individual want to change their phones to good one , they need wise information from their before phones. All their experiences comes from their early life.
Second, there are so many good things which are experienced with friend, mother , father or any other family member for human. These are sometimes positive or negative. For example, first dating with girlfriend or boyfriend, another is birth of the first child for parents these kind of experiences are positive. In contrast , the worst example is death of any person of their life. This gives us more annoyence, sometimes this type of experience causes anxiety, for instance when husband die wife could be very bad and she have a physcologica l behaviours. All kind of this situations comes from before.
In my opinion, taking account of all this reasons, there are so many values in people before life. They should be used in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, for example, for instance, in contrast, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1061.0 1977.66487455 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 219.0 407.700716846 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84474885845 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.48103885553 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41463710819 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 212.727598566 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593607305936 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 618.680645161 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.6882115531 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.7857142857 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6428571429 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.096408955558 0.236089414692 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.036046821385 0.076458572812 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0258805834495 0.0737576698707 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0670698560672 0.150856017488 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215940757176 0.0645574589148 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 86.8835125448 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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