When in conflict, financially struggling school districts should offer classes in music rather than visual art.
In conflict situations, the would be a difficult decision about which one is the best a music or the visual art, and it depend's on wherever, whenever and whoever used that. these two types of things are a good kinds of titles in an education life. All of them sometimes ruled in big countries' universities and schools.
First of all , there so many problems faced by students, some of these problems are as needing money, working on difficult lab assignments, fighting students together. All of these problems cause much stress to schools' members, and students degrees dropped down. And, their education diplomas could be failures and it would went off. For solving these problems, governments and community of schools consider many solutions. The one of these solutions is focusing other titles such as music, doing sports and making arts.
Also, some solutions need a high prices, but other not. And, the high price activities could not done in poor countries because they do have ample money. On the other hand, they usually make facilities which does not impact their budgets such as playing sports, singing a song, and painting the visual arts. In big countries, they could choose a great cost activities such as travelling to long distances like going abroad. All parts of these experiments cause less blood pressures and they affect people mental health positively.
In addition, some activities need the good kind of personal abilities. For example, if people who want to singing a song they would have the high quality volumes, in contrast they effect their audiences badly and negatively. but, in the painting the most parts of these skills learned after the birth. Almost all of these people should a volunteer on that preferring process which choosing either the music or the visual art.
In conclusion, taking account of all above reasons, I definitely do not agree that statement people should choose the music rather than visual art. I think, the music skills designed by god when the baby grown in their mothers' pregnancies.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: These
...erever, whenever and whoever used that. these two types of things are a good kinds of...
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Line 1, column 211, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'kind'?
Suggestion: kind
...t. these two types of things are a good kinds of titles in an education life. All of ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...niversities and schools. First of all , there so many problems faced by student...
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Line 3, column 325, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'go', 'wend'
Suggestion: go; wend
...diplomas could be failures and it would went off. For solving these problems, govern...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...t their audiences badly and negatively. but, in the painting the most parts of thes...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, kind of, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1713.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 339.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05309734513 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50937860214 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581120943953 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3904223549 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1578947368 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8421052632 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26315789474 5.45110844103 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143438980236 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0417007008046 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669338554923 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962731546514 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0794165602693 0.0645574589148 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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