government should cancel the fee of education

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government should cancel the fee of education

A Good Education

A fee is a cost which about education, buying some things such as a car, a desk, a pencil etc. And, it often could be outcome and it is given by people who is a student on education of universities. There are so many the fee of eduction obtained by governments. I think, governments should think their citizens' incomes and outcomes.

First of all, there are too many costs in education, especially in the university level. In all universities, students have to do some things such as buying books of lessons, a computer and its softwares. Because, all these materials and tools are rules decided by universities managements. All of other extra outcomes decrease students money, then their productivity could be bad.

Also, some of students' parents are a poor, and their budget do not enough for their young adults' graduation. And, some parts of parents make an extra effort but others not, because their abilities do not enough to give their children. And, these members of schools have to make some extra activities such like working in a part-time job. All these things impact students successes negatively.

In addition, there is a tax term in all economic features in all countries, and all of them are supply governments incomes. And, there could be some the tax fee which about giving to students for their education. For supplying students, presidents of countries should create some extra taxes. Because, students developments are more important than the money. If the government want to increase its future life of country it should think its students' mental health.

In conclusion, taking account of all above reasons, I definitely agree that statement. The government should cancel the fee of education. Actually, it should give more money to students and other education products.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
A Good Education A fee is a cost whic...
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Suggestion:
...ents should think their citizens incomes and outcomes. First of all, there are...
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Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the students') or simply say ''some students''.
Suggestion: some of the students; some students
...ir productivity could be bad. Also, some of students parents are a poor, and their budget do...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...untries should create some extra taxes. Because, students developments are more importa...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ents are more important than the money. If the government want to increase its fut...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, so, then, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 300.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09333333333 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77961628047 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.6529443725 48.9658058833 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.4 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219572890006 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830917715907 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147662011718 0.0737576698707 200% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166023550796 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143394730686 0.0645574589148 222% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.65 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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