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A new acquaintance of yours is thinking about studying your native language. How would you convince him or her that this would be a good decision?

Essay topics: A new acquaintance of yours is thinking about studying your native language. How would you convince him or her that this would be a good decision?

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There have been so many languages including an English, a turkish, etc in the world since birth of the world. Some of them still alive even though the most part of them are disappeared. And, some of these languages would be a domestic and a native, and a few of them are international like the English or a spanish. Why is the Turkish language is good, there are many reasons in the below paragraphs

First of all, there are so many historical events in Turkey history, and Turkey has a lot of historical palaces, buildings, mosques, etc. In any time, if the person go to turkey that person who would like to learn these places pasts would know the Turkish language. Because, all of these information written by the turkish language. The best effective method learning it that know the turkish.

Also, some people who like movies and films always watch these kinds of things. In this situation, people have several options such as American movies or Italian movies, but recently Turkish films and movies would be famous the rest of the world. For that reason, if the people look these films they would learn the turkish.

In addition, people of Turkey are so friendly and they have more kindly behaviours such as joking, the respect, and the great parts of them talkative. Then, they usually would like to be their acquaintances and friends, they could be the good listener, their friends would be explained their problem to them. Therefore people have some problems they should have the turkish friend. For the good interaction these friend would learn the turkish.

In contrast, a global language more important than the turkish language all over the world. Because, people use the international language for an education, a trade, travel. In these types of conditions, the turkish language's importance and functions would not be the important.

In conclusion, taking account of all above reasons, any of my acquaintances should learn the turkish language.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 267, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... pasts would know the Turkish language. Because, all of these information written by th...
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Line 5, column 283, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
...w the Turkish language. Because, all of these information written by the turkish language. The be...
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Line 13, column 163, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[10]
Message: The adverb 'usually' is usually put between 'would' and 'like'.
Suggestion: would usually like
...eat parts of them talkative. Then, they usually would like to be their acquaintances and friends, ...
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Line 13, column 310, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...uld be explained their problem to them. Therefore people have some problems they should h...
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Line 17, column 217, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'languages'' or 'language's'?
Suggestion: languages'; language's
... these types of conditions, the turkish languages importance and functions would not be t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, still, then, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 330.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01212121212 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.556009861 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484848484848 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 487.8 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2463871323 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8888888889 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137863099161 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051146677201 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565471845014 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0761863086128 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277968178498 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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