A new acquaintance of yours is thinking about studying your native language. How would you convince him or her that this would be a good decision? Use specific reasons and details in your response.
A new acquaintance of mine is thinking about studying my native language, Spanish. I personally think this is a really good idea because of two principal reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, I think this is a good decision because if you know a new language you can learn so many things, and you can talk with many people, and all of them have something to tell, and something to teach. For example, when I was sixteen years old an English teacher told me exactly the same words, and I started studying English, a few years later a traveled to England and I knew so many people who told me and taugth me many things. I am sure that without the tool of the language the experience would not have been the same .Also, in general people who speaks Spanish is very nice and kind with foreign people.
Secondly, I think it is a good idea because if you know another language is easier for you to travel and to know another places. For example when I was younger and traveled to England, I understood many things and that helped me to travel by plane and by bus on my own. Also, I went to many museums where I needed the language in order to knew the history involved on the exhibitions. Besides, I know many places in my country that are really pretty and I recommend everyone to visit, for example Valdivia, Chiloe and Torres del Paine, and I am sure that if someone visit these places without knowing the native language, it will be more difficult.
That’s why I think not only my acquaintance, but people in general, should study my native language, because whit that tool they will be able to learn thinks talking with people and to visit many beautiful places.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, for example, i think, in general, you know, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 311.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51768488746 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42506836312 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508038585209 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.6135142877 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.5 100.406767564 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.1 20.6045352989 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7 5.45110844103 215% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152325858128 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716265884323 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711770081824 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112370150468 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541932709671 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 11.7677419355 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 58.1214874552 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.53 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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