A new acquaintance of yours is thinking abıut studying your native language. How would you convince him or her that this would be a good decision? Use specific reasons and details in your response.
People have been learning much new information since they were born. While some people have a tendency of learning scientific subjects, others tend to learn new languages. If a new friend of mine thinks about learning my native language, I convince her by explaining several beneficial sides of their decision.
The first reason is that she can meet much more people. When you learn a foreign language, you can make new friends whose language is that you learned. For example, my friend learned Spanish. Moreover, she made Spanish friends when she went on vacation to Spain five years ago. Also, whenever she goes to Spain, she stays with friends at their homes rather than staying at a hotel. To put in a nutshell, ıf you learn a foreign language, you become Earth people. İn addition, the language could not restrict you.
Secondly, learning a foreign language leads you to know a different culture. Every language are unique, furthermore; every language has many differences both in their grammar and in their vocabularies. Besides, proverbs and anonymous stories reflect the cultural features of these nations since languages have been developing with humanity since their existence. Thus, a language can give you a notion of its native. Even if you heard a story of a different native before learning this story’ s language, you understand and interpret this story much more effectively after learning this language. For example, I have been learning English for two years. Moreover, the more I learned, some phrasal verbs started to sound much more logical than before.
Finally, knowing a different language puts you forward during the job interviews. While most of the business is hiring an employee, qualification of applicants, such as how many languages he knows, is evaluated. As a result, it increases your chance of hiring a job if you have a great variety of knowing the language. To illustrate, learning a language out of your mother tongue makes your life easier.
To sum up, learning a different language provides you many advantages. I think that every additional knowledge that a person learned will be beneficial one day for this person.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...now a different culture. Every language are unique, furthermore; every language has...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...be beneficial one day for this person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, i think, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1826.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 356.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12921348315 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70771947018 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561797752809 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2864058071 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3913043478 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4782608696 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.34782608696 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151823143907 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480374473434 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052455920378 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0927805102082 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335284839554 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.