A new acquaintance of yours is thinking about studying your native language. How would you convince him or her that this would be a good decision? Use specific reasons and details in your response
Studying foreign language is not an easy job but once you learned it is like you open a world of new culture and tradition. If one acquaintance of mine is thinking about learning Spanish I should recommend her stop thinking and do it because you would never regret about it. I feel this way for many reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, once you learn a new language your knowledge increase and your ability to communicate with others too. So, if you learn Spanish you will be able to communicate with around of 20 countries, make more relationship and meet new culture. My personal experience is a compelling example of that.
Ten years ago I decided to stared learning English and 3 years later my father decided to made a trip to United States. As a result, I was able to communicate with them and I made a lot of relationship that I am also in contact these days. For these reason, I was really grateful of being studying English, in spite I wasn’t easy but without pain no gain.
Also when you learn Spanish It could be easier to learn more language who are similar. For example, once you learn Spanish is easier to learn Italian and latín because of its similar pronunciation. In fact, you can learn them at the same time and it wouldn’t be as difficult as learn two language with different sound.
To summarize, I would recommend her start learning Spanish because it would be benefits for her. Because, she could increase her knowledge, her ability to communicate with others and it would be easier to learn other similar language at the same time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...s;t easy but without pain no gain. Also when you learn Spanish It could be easi...
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Line 17, column 186, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...bility to communicate with others and it would be easier to learn other similar l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, so, for example, i feel, in fact, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1337.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 285.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69122807018 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64150176002 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522807017544 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.0192236625 48.9658058833 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.5 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206435409476 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769281252559 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671716557888 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124774499551 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070097510957 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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