Medical reseach perfomed on animals
Protest and demonstration are happening in the campus, as the same as in many places because of medical research performed on animals this is name vivisection. Most people are against the ethical and procedure treatment of animals. However, most people agree that the priority should be the reduction of human suffering.
According to the passage humans and chimpanzees share about 99% of their genes. So, it means that it isn’t better substitute for animals experimentation. But, the professor said she is concerned about animals experimentation no matter what and she says there are others ways to make medical research for example computer simulation.
The usefulness of animals testing has been demonstrated over and over, according to the lecture the germ theory, the penicillin and the insulin couldn’t been done without animal testing. In spite of that, the professor demonstrate some medical research that could be done without them for examples: Anesthesia and aspirin.
In conclusion, the professor says that no one can be forced to do anything without an agreement and that it shouldn’t be done no matter benefits. However, In the passage it says that animal testing remains crucial tool today and it is immoral to risk human life when it can be tested on animals.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 259, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[3]
Message: Did you mean 'there are others'?
Suggestion: there are others
...rimentation no matter what and she says there is others ways to make medical research for examp...
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Line 9, column 270, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[2]
Message: Did you mean 'have been' or 'be'?
Suggestion: have been; be
...strate some medical research that could been done without them for examples: Anesthe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, for example, in conclusion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 22.412803532 80% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 30.3222958057 82% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1103.0 1373.03311258 80% => OK
No of words: 207.0 270.72406181 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32850241546 5.08290768461 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 4.04702891845 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94418980958 2.5805825403 114% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 145.348785872 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574879227053 0.540411800872 106% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 419.366225166 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5286961945 49.2860985944 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.3 110.228320801 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7 21.698381199 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 7.06452816374 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.3589403974 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.8541721854 79% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.2367328918 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.42419426049 107% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 63.6247240618 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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