Some people believe that money spent on space research benefits all of the humanity. Other people take the opposite view and say that money spent on this type of research is wasted. Tell which point of view you agree with and explain why, using specific details and reasons.
There are many different views of spent money on space research and its important that we look in to them and explore its implication and reasons, Personally I believe that money spent on space research can be benefits for all the humanity. I feel this way for many reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, its important learned and know about what is out of our world and if maybe there is live out of it. So, with these type of research we can discover it and know the status of our planet from other view. For example, about three years ago I saw a report in the tv and it says that thanks to all the research that have been done they discover that the planet wasn’t square how it was believed back in time and there are more planets that the earth. For this reason, I believe that research benefits contribute with the world development.
Consequently, institutes of space were more motivate to discover another´s things and I think it was the moment in which space research increase. In Contrast, many people believe that spent money in this type of research is wasted, because they didn’t discover anything since many years ago and they just sacrifice money, time and some times people. For instance, they continue doing researches and it still without discover anything. In fact, they believe that if continue doing it maybe one day they will discover something.
In conclusion I am of the opinion that space researches are important for the world and it is benefit for the humanity. This is because it maintains people inform of what is happening out of the world and because they could be near to discover something big and it could mark a before and after of the world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
There are many different views of spent money on space research ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, look, may, so, still, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 305.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70491803279 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48048334706 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 212.727598566 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462295081967 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.9 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.2302872316 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.583333333 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4166666667 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0833333333 5.45110844103 222% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312517685178 0.236089414692 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116693840998 0.076458572812 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0935890434902 0.0737576698707 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193180986067 0.150856017488 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709092077715 0.0645574589148 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 86.8835125448 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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