A new acquaintance of yours is thinking about studying your native language. How would you convince him or her that this would be a good decision?

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A new acquaintance of yours is thinking about studying your native language. How would you convince him or her that this would be a good decision?

Despite the beauty that all languages have, I would totally recommend to any person to learn Spanish. Even though it is a language hard to learn there are many good things and benefits about learning Spanish, the most important are:

First, it is a language that belongs to romantic languages and because of that, I think if you learn Spanish it will be easier for you to learn another romantic language like Portuguese, French or Italian. So, learning Spanish is an open door to learn even more languages because of its similarities. In addition to that, it is important to mention that Spanish is the third language most spoken in the world after English and Chinese.

Second, the phonetic of Spanish it has a poetic thing in some words, for instance, the Word “Etéreo” which can be used to describe something extremely delicate and light, for me has this poetic thing in its phonetic, and like that, there are many words that have this poetic sound in its pronunciation, so I think it is a really beautiful language, not only in its grammatical issues but also in its phonetical terms.

Third, and I think the most important of all if you learn Spanish you will be able to enjoy some really important pieces of literature. It is true that you could always find a translation of a book, but there is no comparison on Reading a piece of Cervantes, García Marquez, Isabel Allende or Pablo Neruda in its real language, they can only be really appreciated in Spanish.

And also, to conclude, if you ever get to travel to some country with Hispanic language either for work, vacation or for study it will be really helpful to know how to speak in Spanish, it will definitely give you a lot of opportunities.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 253, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to even'
Suggestion: to even
...arning Spanish is an open door to learn even more languages because of its similarit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, second, so, third, for instance, i think, in addition, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 302.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73178807947 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73349735809 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513245033113 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.1344086022 184% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.155865955 48.9658058833 231% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 178.625 100.406767564 178% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.75 20.6045352989 183% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.875 5.45110844103 218% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126917493696 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572890339452 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355897413712 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0748226574585 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0210994131005 0.0645574589148 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 11.7677419355 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 58.1214874552 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 10.1575268817 162% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.75 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.0537634409 167% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.247311828 166% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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