Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is often not a good thing for people to move to a new town or a new country because of the loss of old social connection.
Moving is a situation which done by people whose have to make for anything. And, Some of these movements are necessary, some parts of them for reaching any goals, some of them for travelling, but a few parts of them are for nothing. It depend's on where people go.
First of all, there are many social activities in places where people live. All of these activities made by friends talking each others, colleagues who work together, students who study in schools and universities. In these activities, there are several different games which doing by people who know themselves. Establishments of these activities have been lasted for years, and they need people's efforts and concentrations. For that reason, people's social life decrease down negatively.
Also, let's think social places where build in big cities and areas. All of these places built by governments of countries, residents or wealthy people of them. In big places, there are more big social places such as cinemas, shopping malls, stadiums, cafes, etc. And, all of them built by their members, because there must be ample money for creating these spaces. In small cities or poor countries, there are not enough social places because their managements have not money for designing these areas.
In addition, social life related in age of people. Almost all old members of communities would like living in a quite places because they have worked for years, and they want to be relaxing in rest of their life in retirement. Although great cities have quite places the most parts of them want to go the small towns for positive feelings. In contrast, all young children want to be more social than their elders, and all of them want to go the small places because they think that if they go the there they would be not social.
In conclusion, taking account of all above reasons, I definitely agree that statement. In the new places, people have to consider their new contacts and they must to think new approaches about their new meetings and relationships. For that reason, If people do not want to losing their social life they would be stable in their places of environments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1789.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 364.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91483516484 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53596727037 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472527472527 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 535.5 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4008353874 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.45 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196163936718 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689332329767 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041935347103 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1207714566 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540853657062 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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